The story started off well enough but it feels like the ending somehow got deleted before you posted it and you never noticed.

I realise its annoying to get reviews asking for more, but please could u write a sequel? It would be great to hear Vadars reaction to what Palpatine did to Harry :)

Ooh, I love this, very original. :3 A sequel would be awesome but I won't bug you about it. .

~Reivyn Arcuri

Love the story it was sad and happy at the same time.

I really liked this! When are you going to write the rest of it?

Ooh, this is certainly an unusual pairing. XD Absolutely loved it, it was very well written and insanely original. Are you planning to write a sequel for this?

very interesting idea! i would love to see it turned into a chapter fic :)

good luck with your writing.

Katsy

I really enjoyed this. I'd love to see what would happen next!

I know it's only a one shot but what happen with load vader does he come home and he and harry live happily after harry finally kills the emperor but made it look like he had a stoke * wink wink nudge nudge* or maybe lord vader kills him for his attempt at harry's life. and does Luke meet harry. lot of things to think about... or not it's up to you what you do i was just saying this could be a great story instead of a oneshot.

LOL, nice, using a LOTR quote in a SW fic... eh?

BTW I am a retard and for some reason that I don't know my settings changed themselves and that's why I wasn't getting any alerts! which sucks cause that means I have no way of getting back what I lost!

anyway, you're right, it's pretty awesome. I do love MPREg :D Needs more!

And yeah, glad that there was no suit sex, you weirdo. Seriously, vader as darth vader sex? bad.

Hey there, excellent story. Never read one like it. Interesting pairing. There are a few errors though. Now, it can be taken as such, but I'm not saying anything to be mean or anything, I'm just trying to help. They're all minor errors. There's nothing wrong with the writing itself - all the characters are good and the plot is solid. You left the end open but gave us enough that it could stand on it's own. I agree with your author note - that's the real tragedy of most. We screw up or something bad happens and we never move past it and we allow it to fuck up the rest of our lives.

Anyway, the errors I saw:

"but you were as impatient as you ever was." - should be, as you ever were.

"she could grow old with a man who could never age" - this should be couldn't.

"It was only many years later, once Ginny had remarried and had four normal children and she lay dying while Harry offered condolences and looked like a child still, that she admitted to murdering his unborn child." - This is just a run-on sentence. Should be two sentences at the very least. Maybe "she moved on, eventually remarrying and having four normal children. It was only many years later, as she lay dying..." or something like that.

Again, awesome story. Very well done.

good story I hope that there would be another part to it. um when you said

that she could grow old with a man who could never age, and so she divorced him.

don't you mean

that she could not grow old with a man who could never age, and so she divorced him.

I really enjoyed this. I wish there was more, but I'll take what I got.

Wow... That was a great story. Though I really hope you'll write a sequel for it or change the status of this story from that pesky little 'complete' to something I would like much better *wink*

Now that Orion is born and Luke is active, this just begs for a continuation. With how old Harry is, it would be interesting to see if he knew Yoda. And it would be interesting to see how a changed Vader will effect the happenings of the original Star Wars triology... Is that maybe the setting for the story you were talking about? That would be really cool and I would look forward to reading that.

Oh please say your going to continue this story! It is one of the best star wars and harry potter crossovers I've ever read. You can't leave it as a cliff-hanger, what is going to happen with Luke and the emperor?