Enjoyed this very much.

Mya is a ridiculous nickname...

This was really good thank you

Hi
I like you story, it flows really well and it’s a wonderful read but you have made a few mistakes. I’m not sure if it’s intentional or a slip up. For example, you have Narcissa’s maiden name as Gruber. She is a black, Narcissa Black. Second, you changed the fact that Severus’ father was a muggle. It just ticks me off a little, unless it’s intentional in which case it’s cool.

Love this story!

the chapter 19 is gone...is empty! please re update

Amazing story! I'm not sure if you're still writing, especially on here, but I hope you eventually add Chapter 19 if there was meant to be one. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story. It was a really interesting take on the usual time turner story, it was different and because of that I really love it. Thank you for this story!

Wondering . .. does Hermione eventually get back to Ron and Harry and the present?

I think this story has so much potential! It’s very well thought out and I thought you did a good job of creating well rounded and believable characters. I think your dialogue needs a little work so that it’s more fluid and natural. I also thought the ending was a bit abrupt... I think if you had spaced it out into two chapters or spent less time focused on Severus’s initial reluctance it would flow a lot better! Overall good job!

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Lost lost chapter: .

Thank you author for this amazing story.

Loved your story! So much detail! I love your version of a young Snape. And how they don't hate each other right off the bat. I would love to read more time travel fiction from you! Keep up the writing! I'll definitely be following you! Hermione/Snape and Hermione/Draco are my favorite pairings!

Great story!

Don’t mean to be rude, but was there supposed to be a chapter 19?

Very good Story full of love and drama and friendship too I enjoyed it very much.