Reviews for Lost |
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![]() ![]() Enjoyed this very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mya is a ridiculous nickname... |
![]() ![]() This was really good thank you |
![]() ![]() Hi I like you story, it flows really well and it’s a wonderful read but you have made a few mistakes. I’m not sure if it’s intentional or a slip up. For example, you have Narcissa’s maiden name as Gruber. She is a black, Narcissa Black. Second, you changed the fact that Severus’ father was a muggle. It just ticks me off a little, unless it’s intentional in which case it’s cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the chapter 19 is gone...is empty! please re update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! I'm not sure if you're still writing, especially on here, but I hope you eventually add Chapter 19 if there was meant to be one. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this story. It was a really interesting take on the usual time turner story, it was different and because of that I really love it. Thank you for this story! |
![]() ![]() Wondering . .. does Hermione eventually get back to Ron and Harry and the present? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story has so much potential! It’s very well thought out and I thought you did a good job of creating well rounded and believable characters. I think your dialogue needs a little work so that it’s more fluid and natural. I also thought the ending was a bit abrupt... I think if you had spaced it out into two chapters or spent less time focused on Severus’s initial reluctance it would flow a lot better! Overall good job! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lost lost chapter: . Thank you author for this amazing story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story! So much detail! I love your version of a young Snape. And how they don't hate each other right off the bat. I would love to read more time travel fiction from you! Keep up the writing! I'll definitely be following you! Hermione/Snape and Hermione/Draco are my favorite pairings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don’t mean to be rude, but was there supposed to be a chapter 19? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good Story full of love and drama and friendship too I enjoyed it very much. |