Reviews for Lost
Angelus chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
Okay it sounds good enough but the big problem here: Snape does absolutely nothing to help/stop her falling down the stairs, breaking her bones? Knowing how he feels about her? A simple spell would have stopped her...
Guest chapter 20 . 7/20/2015
i was slightly disappointed that when she got back to her time her nickname wasnt used now that they were able to without her questioning it ... but i still enjoyed this thank you
Golden Asp chapter 20 . 7/19/2015
This was a great story, one of my favourite Hermione goes back in time blah blah stories. Very well done! *favs*
riskeybusiness chapter 20 . 7/8/2015
Really enjoyed that ending, much more realistic way to go about things then others I've read! Not sure if you know but the bold/italics were a bit all over the place. :) Thanks for sharing!
riskeybusiness chapter 12 . 7/7/2015
Forgot to say in my earlier review regarding spelling, that I am thoroughly enjoying the story and excited to continue. So I don't come across as some scathing reader.
riskeybusiness chapter 9 . 7/7/2015
Havent finished reading but some annoying spelling mistakes: defiantly instead of definitely several times, and by Most Ponte Potions I presume you meant Moste Potente Potions
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Band-Adius potion, really?! You couldn't think of a better name than that? Humph.
Arlene chapter 20 . 6/26/2015
nice story. Thanks for sharing!
Bedazzled1918 chapter 19 . 4/3/2015
Um I am a bit miffed that I read this & the payoff chapter isn't here...
DuffyBarkley chapter 8 . 3/15/2015
Your story is fun, I love how your characters feel right, like the ones from JKR could really make these choices. The ee Cummings poem in chapter 8 is a great fit
just-jo1 chapter 5 . 3/14/2015
I caught that little nod to e.e. Cummings poem titled may I feel said he. lol
Kimmily chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
So does that mean this is a story without a happy end? THat would be just soo sad, Snape deserves a happy end, if I've everyseen one. I really hope things do not happen the same way that Snape remembers and if they do that they find a new solution, when she returnes to her own year. I am excited to meet Harry's parents and the rest of the maurauders though, sorry for the speeling btw. not always sure how to spell words... you know how it is, anyway. Interesting take, and I will definitly continue reading for now... I do have an account under the same name fyi, just to lazy to log in.
Best wishes,
Lettuce.B.Frank chapter 20 . 1/24/2015
Man I can't stop crying. That was wonderful.
marisamarinee chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
So good!
marisamarinee chapter 15 . 11/16/2014
Hope it works out soon.
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