Reviews for A New Start
AnimeDAngel chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
i am very confused by this story.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/4/2012
Well, don't cry in a corner. That would just be sad on so many levels. Its fairly well written, not to many grammer mistakes. It has a great plot. Though I don't (want) to believe you have a disorder,which in the long run is possibly true. ( kidding) You do seem to have an issue w/ writing long story's. You can practice and w/ lots of hope and determination you'll gradually get better, or you can just say "screw thoughs damned long story's." And stay in your comfort zone either way is fine. ( suggestion: Don't say "screw thoughs..." In the middle of a class, it doesn't go down well with the teachers usually.)
Solaris-Whitefish chapter 6 . 12/4/2010
OMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOOD!

I'M GETTING HOOKED! REALLY BADLY!

UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOON! I NEEEEED A NEW CHAPTER!

P.S THANKS AGAIN FOR DISCLAIMER!

P.P.S SMILE, SMILE, SMILE AND EMBRACE YOUR AWESOMENESS!
Solaris-Whitefish chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
HONEY CHEER UP!

YOUR CHAPTER WAS AMAZING AND IT MADE ME SMILE!

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Solaris-Whitefish chapter 4 . 12/1/2010
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW THIS WAS SOO AWESOME! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

OOH AND THANKS FOR YOU DISCLAIMER!

IT MADE ME SMILE! :)
Solaris-Whitefish chapter 3 . 11/20/2010
AAAAAAAAAAAAW I AM DIGGIN THIS FANFIC! I LOVE IT!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

P.S ARE CLEF AND UMI GONNA BE TOGETHER!