Reviews for Becoming Mine
nrdhrd3 chapter 17 . 4/26/2014
Noooooooo! You better update this story soon! It's so AMAZING!
angelz921 chapter 17 . 1/24/2014
Is this the end of the story? I loved reading the story and was hoping there was more to it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
loved it so far although its not like on the show...
mitsumeteiteyo chapter 17 . 1/26/2012
I LOVE this story! Its so rich and real! Thank you for sharing what you have and I hope you are able to continue. :)
EdwardsBabyGirl2010 chapter 16 . 9/15/2010
Thanks everyone for the reviews so far! I definitely think yall need to keep em comingg! Thanks bunches!

TillieBaby chapter 15 . 9/10/2010
DAMN! i love this story! i am wating for another update soon! lol keep up your good work xxx
silverm00nangel chapter 15 . 9/9/2010
Loved the chapter and hoping to read more!
mikka18 chapter 10 . 9/7/2010
I'm still not caught up yet, but I enjoy this story, so I'll get there eventually! lol, great job :)
EdwardsBabyGirl2010 chapter 15 . 9/7/2010
Well , thanks for the advice in the email you sent me! I'll definitely try to remember that when writing! But, I hope you all like the new chapter! Leave me lots of reviews && i'll keep updating! 3
H pylori chapter 14 . 9/1/2010
You're startting to get a little bit dialoug-y for lack of a better word. The effect is that is is starting to drag on a little, but it is still sweet and although it is frustrating at times wanting to be able to skip ahead and read the 'juicy parts' (with all the action and romance) I know that I'd probably miss something important even if I COULD skip ahead.

Keep it up and hopefully you can update soon.
H pylori chapter 2 . 9/1/2010
I love the way you've managed to word this so... eloquently. It flows naturally and it doesn't seem to be too cheesy although you have put in a lot of whipped-Spike. The only thing I can even think of that spoils it somewhat is that you have Spike having a pulse... Which since his heart doesn't beat is very odd.
Icemanss chapter 14 . 8/31/2010
just started reading this story today seems really cool can't wait for the story to update.
mikka18 chapter 5 . 8/23/2010
Damn, I gotta stop reading AGAIN. Pain in the ass lol. I love this story, it's so freakin hot lol. I'll be back!
mikka18 chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
I know there's way more chapters ahead, but I ran out of time so I wanted to review anyways, LOVE it! I'll be reading the rest later for sure :)

I wanted to say too that I know how it is, I'm a 22 year old single mom to a 4 yr old. It's not easy, but it's worth every minute :)
The Lady of the Land chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
finally she is STARTING to get it! and angel really is a douche bag, good job! i'm really loving your story so far!
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