|Reviews for Dirty Little Secret|
| Guest chapter 77 . 11/15
Amazing. Wish there was more
| fabrayctrl chapter 32 . 10/5
I find it SO ooc and weird this story never address the fact that any normal parents would’ve suggested that their kid should’ve changed schools like seriously it is well known how the shit Rachel has been through at that school was part of the reason the crime happened. I mean just let her back at that school that proved not helping out any student that isn’t a popular one? And the fact that the jocks and especially Karofskis friends could retaliate? Look at what happened to her with the entire glee club “protecting” her. Rachels parents aren’t poor in canon and you should’ve easily addressed that. Rachel at Carmel or a private school during her pregnancy with a strict politics against bullying would’ve been more realistic and I need also to say Rachels ooc when she acted like abortion was a murder I mean really? Canon Rachel was a huge supporter of a woman’s choice and I bet all my money that if she was close to Quinn at season 1 she would’ve helped her to end the pregnancy with Planned parenthood if Quinn wanted it.
| fabrayctrl chapter 31 . 10/5
Not Santana saying fuck what everyone else thinks at mckinley in this case when she keeps that “badass” persona at school to be popular/feared. Their dialogues tire me so much mostly bc her being insensitive isn’t cute or funny and rachel wanting to be called by her last name isn’t something very in character of her. And the fact that Rachel breaks for the smallest things but take all Santana bullshit makes no sense. Santana would still be herself if she doesn’t curse or isn’t crass for a minute to help a friend out with this i mean this isn’t the effect of bullying or a bad breakup it’s a freaking rape/pregnancy I wish she would’ve been more considerate or just leave Mercedes and Quinn help Rachel out. As has been said this isn’t the same Rachel the old one would take S tiring rants but this one would’ve easily snapped because seriously no one has time for that while dealing with a huge trauma. Anyways in this case Rachel doesn’t need a crowd just bc you like other characters I mean I do love Santana but when she’s written the right way, in this case I wouldn’t honestly mind if she didn’t have a relevant role at Rachels recovery idk just my opinion
| xxxSimplyHookedxxx chapter 35 . 7/13
It feels very inappropriate for you writing LOL in your author notes ... I mean the subject matter doesn't need suddenly having LOL thrown in.
| xxxSimplyHookedxxx chapter 31 . 7/13
Seriously you should've just written long chapters instead of short to medium chapters. I mean your plot is all about the horrors of rape ... you would still have the full impact if you wrote long chapters ... and I'm sure the story would have need up being 30 to 40 chapters instead of 77 chapters.
I love the story ... just wish the chapters weren't so chopped at the end.
| xxxSimplyHookedxxx chapter 25 . 7/12
Interesting choice that you chose the male in the wheelchair that Rachel feels safe with. So it's uncomfortable to allow the gay male for Rachel to feel safe withyet the male struck in the wheelchair is okay?
Nope. Sorry but this is wrong.
Mike Chang should've been the male that Rachel felt safe with.
| xxxSimplyHookedxxx chapter 14 . 7/12
Now THIS is the Santana that I like. Wish RIB allowed the writers to always write her this way. This Santana I fully understand why people were always were drawn to her.
Instead we got jerk and backstabbing Santana Lopez 99% of the time.
Too bad that's the Santana Lopez that is always in my minds eye. Too bad that whenever they decide to do a "Glee" reunion that Naya won't be able to come back and try to be the Santana Lopez that you wrote.
RIP peace Naya Rievia ... sorry that you had to play such a horrible character.
| Alexa chapter 28 . 2/9
What about Tina and Kurt's and Quinn's and Finn's pov or thoughts. Will cedes and artie eventually be besties with rachel?
| AngstyCanadianGleek chapter 76 . 12/16/2018
Good luck, Charlie... lol couldn’t help myself. Good story... I read this in a day and I usually don’t stick around past the 30th chapter (adhd) so this story is incredible... good job
| ricecrispie87 chapter 25 . 10/11/2018
I was rereading this story... and while it's beautifully written I think implying that not having an abortion after being raped is the "right" thing to do... is disgusting. Maybe I'm taking the context wrong, and you meant that she's trying to do what she thinks is the right thing to do... I think the insinuation is pretty clear...
| ClaireR89 chapter 77 . 7/30/2018
As I finish this it makes me wonder if I finished it when I read it last time. As soon as I started it I remembered like the fist 1/3-1/2 I knew who attack Rachel but as I just read the last chapter I didnt remember it. Anyway great story! Now on to the sequel :)
| ClaireR89 chapter 63 . 7/30/2018
You should've just put this in with last chapter.
| ClaireR89 chapter 27 . 7/29/2018
I read this story. Idk probably years ago at this point. And idk if it’s my mindset atm or what but like idk this story seems entirely different.
| John Dupond chapter 36 . 9/28/2017
| Writeratheart92 chapter 19 . 2/1/2017
awwww poor rachel and quinn