Now onto Nationals!

Ill be honest, I skipped over most of this chapter. The rapid, sudden scene changes were ridiculously annoying. Not the fact that they were happening, but that they were happening without notice. One second Puck would be saying something at home with the house scene and everything going on in my head, then without warning Im reading something that Shelby is saying (and Ive read half of what she has said before I reach ", Shelby said" which is very confusing.

Something to separate paragraphs is needed, whether its extra paragraph spacing or something like "..." in between lines.

I wont let it ho without saying though that im loving this story!

Hiram and LeRoy

i think there too short

Damn at first didn't want to read hate Rachel hurt but i enjoyed it thanks

Why did Rachel have to freak out because she kissed Quinn ? It was perfect!

I think Shelby should just pop in, admit she made a mistake and ask Rachel for another chance. Finn is a moron, he will say or do the wrong thing so PLEASE don't let it be him! Quinn so has feelings for Rachel!

Rachel is really uncomfortable with any men right now. She needs Shelby.

Oh shit! Puck & Santana beating ass?!

Quinn isn't an idiot. I'm sure she figured out that Rachel was raped.

:/ poor Rachel. I wanna know who did it!

this story is really amazing, you are so talented i can't remember the last time a fanfiction got me this emotinal..thank you so much for sharing this its a gift really️

That was a pretty intense. Well worth the read. Just wow. I am off to read your sequel.

Amazing story. You're such a great writer and keep writing more amazing stories

Loved this so much! Re read this story again before I go to the sequel!