Reviews for Fragments
mandorakat chapter 4 . 3/1
why did Naruto get so mad? I don't really like how Sakura acts kind of gross and pervy, like it's hard to tell if she's serious and it seems unrealistic that she would be if she was the last survivor at the end of the world, like... how would she turn into jiraiya because of death and angst? and since she doesn't really act on it, it seems kind of faked. but Naruto was acting like she was actually not just a joker or really a pervert but an actual rapist. it was really messed up. and then threatening her like that. it was kind of sick. I really hate how she's made to be such and animal and it just seems to get worse every chapter instead of better... likes she's actually a villain now. a psychotic one. like it's not funny or sad any more but really f ed up.
mandorakat chapter 2 . 3/1
man, that fight was hilarious. Sakura turning nuts kind of messed everything up but that really sucked, she was so sweet and funny then she's like savage and animalistic and they all hater her and want to put her down. it was all fun and light hearted and a bit sweet and then that whole 180 was really sad and depressing.
Shieldage chapter 10 . 5/18/2018
I think I get it. Naruto is the youngest, therefore he is the soonest chronological time traveler and as the first world of the set to have a time hole, all time travelers from later chronologically ordered futures were pulled into his world at the point he landed, right? I think that theory holds as plausible unless we find a time traveler who left their Konoha at a point earlier than the present of Naruto's destroyed future. Great story, holds together well and the character development is entertaining
Toad-sage66 chapter 2 . 5/5/2018
I had never really liked the sasuke/sakura ship but with these two i'm on board 100%
Toad-sage66 chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
I am both confused and intrigued
a-d Pilot chapter 13 . 5/27/2017
Yeah, I've thought that if infinite dimensions exist, messing with them is way past exceedingly dangerous.
Like flipping a coin numerous times and hoping it never comes up heads.
NatNicole chapter 13 . 4/15/2017
Keeps on getting more an' more intriguing! :D
NatNicole chapter 11 . 4/15/2017
AMAZING Chapter from start to finish! *grins*
An' I love your Kabuto!
NatNicole chapter 10 . 4/14/2017
Holy shtick... *hugs poor Sakura*
*smirks at how exciting this story is*
*repeatedly bursts out laughing*
NatNicole chapter 9 . 4/14/2017
*cackles throughout reading this Chapter*
NatNicole chapter 8 . 4/14/2017
Lovely Chapter from start to finish! *glomps Sakura*
NatNicole chapter 6 . 4/14/2017
*blinks back tears* Beautiful... Everything 'bout Sakura & then Sasuke in that scene? You're a GENIUS! *hugs Sakura* It all feels so REAL...
*with a Naruto grin, cheers Kakashi on in glee*
*glomps Sasuke at the end of his advice to lil Inari, grinning like Naruto again*
NatNicole chapter 5 . 4/14/2017
*cackles at Kakashi's brain shutting down* Wow this Sakura is deliciously terrifying! I know I'll have nightmares thanks to her but everythin' she does in this from-start-finish just BRILLIANT story just makes me grin!
*smiles* I absolutely LOVE how Kakashi is dealing with the situation!
*jumps up & down, cheering in glee throughout Sakura & Naruto's AWESOME fight*
*glomps Sasuke for summing things up perfect*
NatNicole chapter 4 . 4/14/2017
Dammit! I was so sure me giving my version of Sakura Zabuza's sword is an original idea...
EPIC Chapter from start to finish, though! *grin*
NatNicole chapter 3 . 4/14/2017
*cackles like Anko throughout the modified Bell Test*
Your cool Team 7, their heartbreaking tale to Kakashi, & Team Gai are all beautifully written! Also, this Sasuke is a lot like mine except flirty; which I find hilarious. *smirks*
*cackles again at the conversation between Kakashi & 3rd Hokage*
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