|Reviews for All Fall Down|
| Chipmunk94 chapter 2 . 8/8/2013
This story is adorable. It made me tear up :)
| ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 3/31/2013
Beautiful second chapter and conclusion to this story. Just loved the story of Remy and Josiah and Remy refusing to leave his friend in death and love the fact that their friendship transcended the rules of the time. Perfect how Remy helped Dean get out of the rubble and find Sam and loved the conversation between them all, the spirits bond as brotherly as Sam and Dean's. Great that after Josiah was buried with Remy that they had one last fun toboggan slide down the stairs on the tin tray before going into the light together.
Great to hear that your story was based on something your grandmother told you about her doing that down the stairs as her mother was afraid of storms, it sounds like such fun.
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Great first chapter. A child spirit who somehow is at it's worst during storms, though don't think he is meaning to do what he does and two whumped Winchesters ... it doesn't get better than that!
| Emachinescat chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
This was a beautiful story! :)
| mysteryc chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
I just wanted to say a short thank you very much for all of your stories. Especially this one make me grin all over my face - got me a big laugh of a coworker when she went into my office ;)
I love your stories and your writing style - so thx for all that fun while reading them!
Many greeting from Germany!
| Rachelly chapter 2 . 4/3/2011
I absolutely adore this story. I read it once and have been looking for it ever since! What a treat to find it again and be able to drop you a note! I love the characters! Of course Sam and Dean, but the two ghost boys are adorable...so sweet! And the story line, just fascinating! Especially the part about your family history of thunderstorms. I love how you wove that into it! I loved the hurt/comfort...Dean hurt, then Sam. Dean buried and desperate to get to his little brother. And poor Sammy, trapped and hurt. I loved Dean's way with Sam, worried, concerned, and yet able to relates so well with the boys. The humor was perfect...everything was perfect! Thanks for sharing your talents with us! RAchelly
| ccase13 chapter 2 . 3/23/2011
I have read all your wonderful stories. I liked All Fall Down best of all, partly because I am a South Carolina native and partly because of the little boy ghosts.
I think you write the most interesting ghosts of all the writers I have tried. I look forward very much to any new stories you write. Thank-you for writting for us
| CeCe Away chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
This is a really sweet story. I loved these little ghosts and am so happy the Winchesters could give them peace. Throw in some hurt Sam and Dean and it's just perfect.
| scootersmom chapter 2 . 9/28/2010
I loved this story! You do such a great job depicting the boys'characters that they seem so real. I love the stories about the boys before the thb changed them so much. The newest season seems to have their personalities completely switched from the beginning of the series! I hate how they make Sam seem so cold and uncaring now especially after facing down Lucifer and saving the world! Hopefully, the shows will improve over time this season, but I am beginning to wonder! Don't they know we all love to see them together and caring about each other? AnywaY, that is why your stories are so wonderful! I can read and enjoy Sam and Dean as they were really meant to be! Thanks for that!
| Cainchan chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
great chapter. :_)
| ImpalaBabe chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
Oh what a nice story. Was really a pleasure to read it. Great plot and very well written. Easy to read and in the end, I shed some tears, cause it was sweet and heartwarming.
Thanks for sharing.
| DiniK chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
i liked this story very much. its kinda nicely light hearted, despite the slavery theme. and the friendly ghosts and their friendship were refreshing. great written and i too would kinda like that sledding on the stairs ;)
wonderful story, wonderfully written!
| La Mariane chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
Hi! I was reading Pupettmaster and the boys got hurt, so I stopped to find a happier story, and this one was very cute. I loved the two ghosts. And Dean's soft side too, even if it's well hidden.
| Zatnikatel chapter 2 . 7/4/2010
I love how they just want to make sure the other is safe! *meep*! It’s so appropriate that Dean bonds with the child ghost, and smart move to have the ghost help him out. Actually I’m amazed Show hasn’t done this, seems like a great wheeze.
Whoah, hope they have hurricane cover… and “If I believed in angels” – LOL!
“and yanked off his t-shirt” *Oh my freaking God*. You wrote that for me, I just know it.
What a sad story about Josiah, but sadly authentic: I don’t imagine they would have wasted much time looking for a slave. and sad too how you compare the child!ghosts’ lives to Sam and Dean’s, and have Dean sort of voice his belief that he and Sam aren’t in it for the long-haul. Beautiful scene of the two little boys at the end hon: it really moved me.
As usual, no one matches the way you write these lovely *complete* stories that are the closest thing fanfic has to actual early season episodes. Take me ages to get to them sometimes, and then I always kick myself for not finding the time to read them earlier…
| Zatnikatel chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Hey you! I’m reading this whole first section full sure some awful fugly is chasing my boy and all he’s doing is trying to get in out of the rain! You almost made up for it with this visual: “His gray t-shirt, soaked through by the wind-driven rain, clung to the contours of his chest” – ZOMG. No overshirt next time, please. Just the tee will do fine, believe me. I have given you Sam’s rock hard pecs and washboard abs. I think just the tee is the least I can expect in return. :/
SUCKS IN BREATH LIKE A WHISTLE FLOWING INWARDS! “he shrugged off his sodden shirt…” You did write this for me! Now reads on in the hopes of towel!Dean… Hurricanes: those are bad. Very bad. Are they in Florida? I don’t know if this reviewing as I read works or not, I tend to get a tad excited. Oh! South Carolina. Still, at least they're in my ballpark.
“his wet clothes clinging” :-D [Okay, ’fessing up: I’m on my second glass…] Hurt!Dean: always a good thing in my book.
“slid his hands under Dean's still-wet t-shirt…” Back off, Sam. I love how Sam keeps talking to himself to stop himself from flying into a panic, and I love his world-weariness at Dean’s bravado – it’s so true to character. OH NO! SAM! I should have remembered: Equal Opportunity Whump! Lordy I hope the wind doesn’t take the roof off. Oops, tree… what roof?
Jeez, a house fell on them. Reading on…