Reviews for Obsession
Guest chapter 21 . 1/22
Marron knows Muay Thai? Niiiiiice.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
""It would appear that way, an option I can think of is that the guy has an abnormally large bone structure which stopped the bullet in its track," said the officer sounding like a forensic scientist."

The officer is making shit up. not only is he making shit up, but if the *pancaked* bullet really did get stopped by a hurr durr retarded large bone then would the bullet not still be in the srm of the guy shot? dont be retarded
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
bullets are squished flat on impact, if the bullet even penetrated at all it would be fucking hard to determine what percentage of the bullet penetrated.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
Navy blue is a colour Khaki is another colour. So which colour is his pants? Khaki or navy blue? srsly wtf
Secret.Identities chapter 22 . 5/20/2016
AND YOU LEFT IT AT THAT?
;_;
That fight scene was amazing though... seriously. It kept me on edge and pumping adrenaline.

Butbutbutbutbutbut It's only one chapter left! The finale! Can't you finish it? D:
I mean there's still the reaction to the fight... comparing with the world tournament... and the DANCE!

I hope you do come back to end it! Thanks for the awesommmme read!
Guest chapter 22 . 11/1/2015
Great read but where is the final chapter?
FlameDragon14 chapter 22 . 10/30/2015
This is an absolutely fantastic story. I love how you allowed both father and daughter to learn these new techniques and such a great showing. I've always thought Hercule had potential if given the right teacher and motivation. He did after all win his first WMAT fairly, at least I think he did... Anyway, hope to see more great Dragonball Z stories, and hope you get around to loading up the last chapter of this one. Your so close to completing this story that it would be a real crime to leave it like this.
RedRoseGrave chapter 22 . 10/7/2015
Excited to read the next chapter :) Love the story idea
gabelou1991 chapter 22 . 6/24/2015
J'aime c'est bien ecrit et c'est de bonnes histoire.
LegendOfTomorrow chapter 22 . 4/19/2015
Where the hell is it! Unless you have died, why couldn't you have finished it out!
LightningFireZC chapter 22 . 4/18/2015
So awesome, everything has been sooo cool we need that final chapter
Engel2092 chapter 22 . 3/23/2015
how does the story end?
crazzyredhead chapter 22 . 1/30/2015
i hope you update this again soon please keep it up and looking forward to an update again soon
Mr.Son chapter 22 . 12/29/2014
What happened to the next chapter
Swimmy D chapter 22 . 12/1/2014
Ahh what's the ending! Please update.
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