|Reviews for Mother's in Town|
| Rojjy chapter 18 . 8/11/2013
The way he acted like a jerk was NOT an exception.
| Rojjy chapter 17 . 8/11/2013
| Rojjy chapter 15 . 8/11/2013
Sick bastard. I would have fucking double bitch slapped you when you started annoying me at my date dickhead.
| katiearbour95 chapter 18 . 5/21/2013
I really enjoyed the beginning up to the part where the guy interrupted their first date. I wasn't so crazy about the kidnapping thing. And then the in bed almost sex, it was totally out of character I felt. I thought it broke the flow of your story. Besides, he's got a huge cast on. I don't see that being the first thing on his mind. And I don't understand how he goes from being so sweet to ignoring her and being rude like that. Like I said, broke his character and the story flow.
| DarkSun.Sama chapter 18 . 3/15/2013
Hey what happened next ...
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/27/2011
3 aww It was actually cute. And it only took you 6 days to write it? That's why you didn't get reviews right away. You have to give it time.
Anyway, I am going to tell you what I think...You may like some you may not.
I loved the beginning. I thought it was cute that she was oblivious and saw him as a friend and he was falling for her like when she hugged him, thanking him and he didn't want it to end. 3
I didn't really like a lot of the middle. I love cheesy romance stuff, but sometimes it gets a little much. I didn't like how he just randomly asked her to marry him and I thought the kidnapping was kind of really strange and random.
And I was on the last chapter thinking it was going to end terribly, (in my opinion all fanfictions start off good then end bad) so I was not excited to read it.
But then I loved it. I loved how you actually put the kiss scene in the story. 3 And you described it just like it happens. 3 That kiss is one of my all time favorite kisses in any romantic film. 3
So good job, some of it I wanted to just close the window but overall I liked it :)
| DorkFace chapter 18 . 4/22/2011
Wow so its probably a while since you published this right? So suprise review much? Arent they the best ones? Haha.
I really love your writing style its adorable, just what the doctor ordered. Trust me I needed a good dose of cute!
Anyway I noticed your Author notes about no body reading this fic. You should keep your chin up and write because you enjoy it, not for the amount of reviews. Reviews are great but not the be all and end all - in my opinion.
And this one is living proof that even when a story has long since been completed people are still going to read it. And trust me, I read more fics than any sane person should and I NEVER! Review. Ever.
So, keep up the writing dude. I loved every second of this story.
| 1hopelessromantic chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
OMG that was so cute I read it like 50 times you did a really good job this is totally going on my favorite list. :)!
| OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I just read the beginning and I HAD to review this already!
I love the writing style, and the story is going great, the plot line is very interesting!
Great job! :)
| shepweir always chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
Hope that Gigi is going to be comforted by Alex. it seems like the guy Jack was a jerk.
| shepweir always chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Great start. I am intrigued and looking forward to reading this. Love this couple.
| GallifreyanBiochemist chapter 18 . 6/16/2010
Awww. :) Good job in incorporating the actual lines from the movie. ;D
Looking forward to another story from you.
Eda M. :D
| GallifreyanBiochemist chapter 17 . 6/16/2010
Oh, don't be upset. :D I'm reading your story. I'm pretty sure the low turn out of reviews and readers stems from the fact that the fandom of He's Just Not That Into You is very VERY small. Which also saddens me. :(
I really love the movie, especially Alex and Gigi. :D
I hope you don't stop making fics about them. :D I'm always on the look out. :D
| GallifreyanBiochemist chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
I love Alex and Gigi! I'm soo happy of you doing a multi-chapter fanfic about them. Kudos! :D
| CosmicInflux chapter 4 . 6/13/2010
I really... really don't like her mom, already. :(