Reviews for Linda The Cocaine Chronicles
MildlyInsane chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
That's odd... I don't believe that Becker would have called Linda a bitch though...

Also your format is a bit off. There should be a new paragraph every time someone new speaks.

e.g:

"blah blah blah," Reggie said.

"Bleep," Becker yelled back.

"Bleep you, sucka!" Reggie retorted.

Instead of:

"blah blah blah," Reggie said. "Bleep," Becker yelled back. "Bleep you, sucka!" Reggie retorted.

It's a lot easier to read with the more frequent breaks, and much more obvious who is saying what. :)