Reviews for Before The Fawn - First Draft
halka heroda chapter 34 . 6/30
How could you How could you kill Julia she was one of my favourite characters and you killed her!
halka heroda chapter 29 . 6/29
I love lily and julia's friendship bond it's so cute
Guest chapter 40 . 5/18
Peter is such trash

And James can be a dick
Guest chapter 39 . 5/18
I would destroy that Isabelle bitch. James and Lily are too nice, naive. Dumb. No wonder Peter was able to betray them so easily. Trusting people like that Isabelle bitch, Peter, ridiculous…. Fools of youth. I miss Julia, she was smart and knew how to read people, would tell others off. James should be telling Isabelle off, not conversing with her on his damn honeymoon when she’s making slurs at his wife and by extension, himself. Highly inappropriate.
LadyPrefect chapter 23 . 1/1
Ok so I kept going a little bit and it gets better, patience is everything
LadyPrefect chapter 20 . 12/28/2023
I started reading this fic excitedly and abandoned it now on the twentieth chapter. The writer writes very well, but this Lily is unbearable, a pain in the ass and the story doesn't develop.
Fayejase chapter 19 . 9/16/2022
Fayejase chapter 18 . 9/15/2022
This is honestly agony. Lily is driving me nuts. James is a patient saint for putting up with it all. I know she’s going through a lot but jeez she’s adding so much drama into their lives by being this way… please please tell me it’s not much longer
EnigmaticEmperor chapter 52 . 4/15/2022
The best Jily fic ever!
tallamericanowithmilk chapter 20 . 2/20/2022
tallamericanowithmilk chapter 19 . 2/20/2022
the reveal of her Patronus… PERFECT. oh my god i could FEEL the emotion.
rosyliang069 chapter 53 . 11/26/2021
I really loooove this story! It is fantastic! Will you finish this story? Pleeeeease finish this story!
Guest chapter 28 . 11/9/2021
I’m loving this story. But a bit confused about Lily. A few chapters ago she tells her mum she just wants to be a wife and mother and not so important things. But now she’s being super painful about having a job and living with James. I just want everyone to be happy lol
Guest chapter 53 . 7/15/2021
The best I've read yet
Wish you finished it
Guest chapter 15 . 7/14/2021
No cap I would’ve whooped tf outta Julia
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