|Reviews for How to Gain an Invisible Friend|
| popian3 chapter 12 . 3/11
| Psyco101 chapter 12 . 3/4
The moment you said "marine bar" I knew it wouldn't end well! Oh this will be fun! I'm enjoying the new turn these past two chapters have brought
| Insert Name Here chapter 12 . 2/8
This. Is. Friggiin. Awesome. There are some problems (like the dad-ace thing i mentioned under some other name) but you're writing style - and the humour itself - more than makes up for that. I can't wait to read more so plleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeee update soon. I love you (for writing this story).
| Yeah so chapter 8 . 2/8
I really love the story and all - and ill probably review when i get to hte end
but - doesn't little-ace know that ghost-ace is his older self? I mean, Ace told him stories about Sabo and Luffy and he also talked about how he wasnt the older brother (before) before they went out and met Sabo... if that makes any sense?
| Red Moon Lollipop chapter 12 . 2/6
This is hillarious! I can't wait to see how the timeline gets screwed up.
One question... What about Ghost Ace's tattoos? I think they'd be pretty visible, unless Ace could materialize a shirt in addition to his hat. :) But if I happened to miss something earlier that explains it, then just ignore this.
Anyways, I love your story. Hope to see an update soon!
| SerenePhenix chapter 12 . 1/17
I love this hilarious... (tries hard to search for a word that will express the sheer gloriousness of this cracky fiction)... THING! Yeah, "Thing" is a good word... srsly... okay, maybe not but it still rings true!
| Angelic Fluffle chapter 12 . 1/1
This is hilarious! I can't wait to see more!
| Gcatthewonderful chapter 12 . 12/26/2013
Ah yes, a good fanfic. Just what I needed.
| maleficus-lupus chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
*snickers* Oh man, things are going to go oh so wrong, and Little Ace is going to just laugh.
| 6Lisa9 chapter 12 . 12/1/2013
One word : hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Anjelle chapter 12 . 11/16/2013
So these past 2 updates were awesome! :D I can't WAIT to see what you have in store fore this story. It's sure to be hilarious. And interesting. Interestingly hilarious. Like cracky plot. I wonder if the group's going to somehow end up at the execution platform. I also wonder what Ace thinks of Gold Roger, since he hasn't grown up under his name. Moreover, I'm curious about what Ace thinks is his "dad's" name. What could Portgas have told him...? But that's not important. What is, however, is that this is getting seriously awesome! Thanks so much for the updates! I'll patiently await the next
| Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
I swear to God, I was about to ask if Smoker was there... But this is three and a half years before Luffy becomes a pirate, so who the fuck knows where Smoker is. Still, logic aside (because really, who the hell needs logic), it would be kind of awesome for 'Dread Sorcerer' Ace to meet him and Ace Senior to be either freaking out in the background or cheering his 'son' on. And I don't care if calling him senior sounds old. Technically, he's nearly 40 years old. He was... what, 20 when he died? Then Little Ace growing up to 17 years old... Ghost Ace is 37.
Also, the end for your A/N made me laugh. "I LIKE screwing shit up. It's fun." XDD
| sweetlilsunshine chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
Hah, i liked the ending. Wonder how much damage the two of them are going to cause.
| AmmyChey3X chapter 12 . 11/15/2013
It's so awesome that you updated! :) I love how Makino handles Ace, Sabo and Luffy, she's probably scarier than Garp!
Any chance you can make the chapters longer? I also can't wait to see what major sadistic plot point you prepared for Dead Ace as well. :D
| 3kitttens chapter 12 . 11/15/2013