Reviews for A Captive Light
Liliana chapter 11 . 5/15/2011
I really like how this chapter was written. I also loved how Ken was totally anticipating that Kari would lie and he warned her not to. And what a cliffhanger!
Liliana chapter 10 . 5/14/2011
Wow. I so did not think Ken was going to email Izzy. That kid is way too evil! Poor Gatomon is so traumatized. Can't wait to read more!
Liliana chapter 9 . 5/14/2011
Ooh, major cliff hanger! I wonder what the message that Izzy got said! I got so freaked out when Cody and Armodillomon fell off the cliff! Ok i'm going to go read the next chapter now...
Liliana chapter 8 . 5/6/2011
I love the ending! It was so sad that the second Kari and Gatomon got reunited they got separated again...although technically i guess its a good thing
Liliana chapter 7 . 4/28/2011
Best chapter so far! Poor Tai he's beating himself up so much right now!It was funny how both T.K. and Davis said they were going to kill Ken. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Liliana chapter 6 . 4/27/2011
So suspenseful!I bet Ken's going to be at the door and then kidnap her and then everybody's going to try to rescue her but lots of things will go wrong :) can't wait to read the next chapter!
Liliana chapter 5 . 4/23/2011
I really liked the part at the end when their digivices glowed and then the zhannemon stopped being evil. great job and i can't wait for the next chapter!
Liliana chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
Ok, something's seriously wrong with Ken...I mean seriously. Being that evil is not normal...
Liliana chapter 3 . 4/22/2011
Oooh, this chapter's so dramatic! It's written so well- I can really feel how desperate and devastated Kari was.
Liliana chapter 2 . 4/21/2011
I loved how while everyone was distracted with rescuing Cody, Zhannemon took Gatomon! It totally took me by surprise!Great job
lesli smith chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
I love the phrase it is to delicious to watch him squirm! I was pretty lost in general, but still fun to see your work.
Liliana chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Oh my god he's so evil! And he used the whip...freaky!I wonder who he's going to capture? Looking forward to see how he captures them :)
assana73 chapter 14 . 4/19/2011
Hey! I thought you said you weren't gonna bring the dead back to life! ...although he never actually died, he just got really wounded, so it's okay. Can't wait for the next chapter, but don't rush yourself okay?
Genun chapter 14 . 4/18/2011
So cute. I kinda wanted Ken to be hit. He definitely deserved it. I mean at least take away his digivice, but ah well. Great chapter. It feels like this chapter is starting to wrap it up, as if its almost done! Favorite parts where how kari described herself after knowing TK was alive, and when TK spoke. Have to say, symbolism with the hat again is cute. I am looking forward to seeing how you wrap it all up. Also have to say, ken was a great villain. I enjoyed seeing how even with the arrow in his face, he will still think of beating the others, but he also didn't want anyone to get hurt. Great villain, and it was so heartwarming with TK not dead.
crestoflight3 chapter 14 . 4/16/2011
I can't stop smiling! You said...but if he wasn't...see, I can't even type a coherent thought! Just, update soon, please.

One quick thing, nothing major, but you typed Angemon instead of Angewomon...'Before any of the Digidestined or Digimon could reach him, Angemon signaled...' Not a biggy, but thought I'd mention it.

Update soon! Please! Then I can reread all of this in one sitting...
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