|Reviews for Thunder and Lightning|
| RedLightXIII chapter 1 . 4/17
Awesome little one shot! Love to see another chapter of Hope talking to Lightning though! Five stars!
| thedemonoftheleaf chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
There needs to be a sequal
| AssasinZAssasin chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
This is great and i look forward to seeing an update.
Heh i feel kinda sad for elly, how is he going to put her down without breaking her heart? (providing Light accepted him of course)
Great job Compadre!
| umi luna chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
Ineresting I wanna know what happens next
Please update soon XD
| espadaknight4 chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Too short...could you add another chapter? Please?
| ssnw chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
plx do continue : it looks promising
| Xinyii xo chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
aww that was so cute 8DD i loved it 8DD
but i think the ending was a bit weak and that it could have been extended a little bit like Hope actually telling Lightning his feelings and her reponse.
| Daedulas chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
There were some minor grammatical errors, but aside from that, I REALLY enjoyed reading this. The whole unrequited love/platonic/Friend Zone theme between Hope/Light is such an immense field, and there is a ton of things to write about them in that way.
You've done a great job here. You've nailed the characters just right. Hope having a girlfriend was an unexpected surprise-personally, I'm pulling for him and Light :P
Lastly, I absolutely loved the whole storm/lightning metaphor. Spot on, and perfect.
| Jinnai chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Quite a good story so far. Most of the fics I've read simply sum up the time gap between the game and the story - I've enjoyed the more in-depth method you've taken. I'm also interested in how this story continues. As such, I will await the next chapter. Thanks!
| Andrea Ye chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Nice story, and you write well so don't worry about being rusty.
Please update soon.
| Hari-chan15 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Nice! I really like how the storm incites Hope's longing for Lightning. Haha- was there supposed to be a pun? :D
| Lightning Catastrophe chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
What are you talking about? That WAS good! Heh, Hope being afraid of lightning reminded me of Rikku from FFX
Anyways, could you pleeeeeeaaaaaaaassssseeeeee continue this? l love the pairing HxL and there aren't very many good ones at that either -.-