Love the start, would love to see a whole storyline around this. Yeah, Gibbs reaction will be interesting to watch, not to mention Tony and Abby, have a feeling Abby will be a problem. In my mind I have a feeling Gibbs reaction may be bothersome in the beginning, but it won't be long before he is Tim and Jon's biggest supporter.

Worth writing more
Hint hint

Sentinels, guides, Stargate and NCIS... with a cameo by Daryl Banks... it doesn't get better than this. I'd love to read Gibbs' reaction, particularly when he finds out just how much MiniJack really knows about the military.

Hope that someday you continue this. Loved it.

Would love to see more of this! I adore mini-Jack fics :)

Interesting. I like it good one shot, but I would not mind if it continued. - Very fun.

Great story! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

I'd love to see Tony's reaction to Jon being Tim's new guide. After all Tony always thinks of Tim as a geek, and calls him Probie (a name I seriously hate).

This is a good story.

i liked it! will look for more, hopefully not a oneshot, as it seems like a good story! T

*grinning like a loon* I do hope you'll update this soon!

very interesting thus far, I'd love to read more

Keep it coming!

So, would NCIS then employ Jon or something?

I can just imagine Jon beginning to fit into the crew.

Interesting. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing this story.

Loved this! I hope you do continue it, I can't wait for Gibbs' reaction to having to babysit a highschooler - or so he thinks!

please do continue this story with more parts, even if it is a series of one shots. It is good. I think there is so much you can do with this xover even if it is kept in the NCIS setting.