Reviews for Colliding Breezes
Rigelle chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
I like it. were you planning to write more? It seems to lend itself to continuation. Tylor's mind truely is an enigma, and so this sort of thing could be quite possible. Sort of like a Kuro (black) side to a good person. I like the idea. My only thing is... Keep the same tense throughout the story. one minute it's present tense, then the next sentance it's past, try to get some consistancy in it- choose a tense and stick with it throughout. if you don't feel you write present tense very well, do it in past and vis versa. Aside from that, it seems really great. I'll be looking to see if you do add more. :)
Priest chapter 1 . 2/17/2002
interesting it is nice to see some thing new here. keep up the good work, ja ne (_)
Bunny chapter 1 . 2/14/2002
Creepy...very creepy...but I guess Justy does have a pretty warped mind, as demonstrated in episode # 19, "Sleeping Beauty", when Yuriko and Azalyn go into Tylor's mind. Good story..but like I said before...creepy.