Reviews for Chosen
BlackAquoKat chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I honestly wish you made an entire chaptered story of this. The detail you put in, the thoughts you detail, the spaces you fill...you have some real potential. But in the end, it's your choice. I wish there were more PMD authors that put this much thought into their stories...oh well.

Fantastic job!
Dawn of Oblivion chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
I cannot believe this has no reviews. The whole scene you created went very fitting to the real storyline in a dramatic sorta way. Why couldn't this story be more known!