Reviews for A Question of Why
great gospel chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
A brilliant piece. You portrayed her reasons believably, and this was obviously well thought out. I liked that you pulled quotes from the manga to help move it along. Well done.

ssadropout chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
That panel in the manga where Riza (newly stationed in Ishval and seeing Roy in action for the first time) has him in her cross hairs is so incredibly powerful. You mention your "stranger" literary choices xD, but IMHO, what Arakawa did there was really gutsy. I must have stared at that panel for minutes, wondering if I was interpreting the panel correctly. It was really interesting to read your interpretation.

I thought that our stylistic choices were just fine! chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Beautiful characterization.

Loved that it ended with the little talk she had with Winry. Might have had an even bigger impact if her sentence would have been the last, but oh well might just be me.

Love it.


the striped one
Cafe Au Liet chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I liked the evolution of her 'reasons'. Seems like you put a lot of thought into it. :) Nice story. :D