Reviews for Consequences
Zippy Saboteur chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
It's Cruciamentum. If you're going to write in a fandom take the 20 seconds I just took and look up the proper word and spelling in the btvs/angel wikia. It barely took any time at all. Also putting author's notes in the middle of a chapter is distracting and pushes the reader out of the story instead of pulling them in. But as it is your story, you can put author's notes wherever you want to, though it may cost you readers.
john777 chapter 9 . 7/18/2011
good story, keep writing
jabbarulez chapter 8 . 6/2/2011
kukukuku... i sense a slaughter is coming. can't wait for the next chapter!

4/5
Kamagong chapter 8 . 12/19/2010
I would have preferred if Buffy actually died - permanently, no second chances. Your story kinda went askew when you let her live with only a slap on the proverbial wrist. Essentially; she is an accessory to several counts of murder via Angelus's rampages. 3rd degree murder, I think would apply to her due to gross negligence on her part. Youthful inexperience can only cover so many excuses that doesn't include the loss of life - directly, or indirectly in this case. During that time in the series, all she could think about were her feelings and trying to get Angel his souled self back until it was almost too late. It very nearly took the end of the world before she started getting her head out of her ass. From what I read in your story, she was completely blind and oblivious to everything but herself - and looked like she still was when Travers was making her that offer. Hell, if she was in some army in a backward government, they'd have had her in front of a firing squad for dereliction of duty and treason (i.e. betraying humanity by putting her own selfish needs above others).
DragonGod926 chapter 8 . 11/4/2010
Will "Anne" try to visit her mother? Also, what will she do about Xander and Jenny...since their actions destroyed her family and effectively "killed" her.
Count Alexander-The Black Lion chapter 8 . 11/3/2010
This is a very promising plot, in my opinion you would do well to just finish off cordelia; not that I don't like her, on the contrary, I love her character, but it would do well not mix too much the plot and lose focus. This I say counting on what I saw until now of the plot, I won't presume to know how good the story would be with her alive to the end.

Your grammar as far I can tell ( is not that much, I tell you...) is impecable, and all in all, if you finish the story it would be an unique and awesome story.

Congratulations ;D
DragonGod926 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Since Buffy isn't truly dead, will the Council return her to her mother? What is to become of Buffy and Giles? Will Xander and Jenny ever discover the truth so that they won't be ridden with guilt like they are right now.
Acheron Blake chapter 7 . 9/27/2010
Alright. This is an awesome story. Firstly, because you mentioned Anita Blake. I am a die-hard Anita fan and her name in your fic made me smile. So thanks for brightening my day. Secondly, for compiling so many crossovers in such a good way. Others try to pile in the characters by the bushels and make a huge mess. You've managed to make it cohesive and awesome, though some of them went over my head. Awesome fic. Please update soon.
john777 chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
Good story, I like Xander/Jenny pairing and Kendra, Blade hunters.

Keep writing
whatweareafreaidof chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
thank you for writing this, nice to see some blames buffy for letting anglues kill for months.
farwalker chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
things are not going well for the vampires.

Too bad about Oz.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 7 . 8/23/2010
I like it! **
john777 chapter 6 . 7/10/2010
Good story, keep writing.

Maybe more Jenny/Xander realtionship

Update soon.
Maltor chapter 6 . 7/6/2010
Like the story so far... it's like an extended morality lesson of 'be careful of what you wish for.' It will be interesting t see where you take it.
DragonGod926 chapter 6 . 6/30/2010
Will he find out that Buffy and Giles are still alive? I'd hate to have him believing he is directly responsible for their deaths. Also, will Joyce try to get Xander arrested for accessory to murder, since it was his email that set things in motion? Y'know what irks me, with all his military knowledge...why didn't Xander just rig the mansion to explode during the day when Angelus and his minions couldn't do anything about it?
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