Reviews for Every Subtle Thing
Ghost Wulf chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Oh wow, that was the best Tales of Vesperia story I've ever read. :D Your writing style was engaging and it had a great flow throughout the story. You really nailed the characters too. :D I really really hope you've written more for Tales of Vesperia because I'm dying to read more!
Silverchild of the winds chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Yuri is always trying to take care of everyone, isn't he. And I really shouldn't be in this fanfic section, being only halfway through the game. this is adorable though, yet I have trouble imagining Flynn throwing pillows.
almyki chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
I loved it, very sweet an in-character. It covers their relationship so well, and I just love any Yuri/Flynn fluff (romantic, platonic, anything) P .

You should try to break up your sentences more though. As I got into the rhythm of the story, I noticed it less, but especially at the beginning many of the sentences were far too long to be read comfortably. I make the same mistake all the time, so I've been working to break up sentences too.

Otherwise, I didn't notice any glaring issues, you write well.

3 ali
fishy chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Wow. That's all I can really say. I really like how you expand on the dynamics of their friendship which is one thing I wish the game had more of. You also do a very good job of invoking the feeling of nostalgia through subtle references instead of using the flashback method. One of the best features, I think, is how you manage to mesh the dialogue and narration so well. You manage to portray how important actions and words are to their relationship, which is just... so true. /rambles

Anyways, this is an awesome one-shot. That's really all there is to it!

-fishy ;D
CrystallizedPen chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
This story is going on my favorite list. It's really good, and touching as why people need a friend for. It's beautiful and touching. Good job on writing this fic, I admire your writing skill
Azure-Wulfe chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Whoa, a really awesome friendship Fic!

You kept both of them completely in character, and fleshed out the friendship between them in a way that seems to be exactly how things should be :3
Miyavilurver chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
breathtaking and oh-so-in-character. you are amazing for writing this 3
Winged Senea chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I LOVE IT! It's AMAZING! IT's so perfect you have no idea ;~; They're actions and everythign they do is sooooo perfect. I love your work adn I am SO GLAD that you don't write them as yaoi. The fight was great, their thoughts I loved because it seemed like it is what they would think. I found it funny, super cute, friendly and a great Yuri and Flynn brotherly friendship experience. Thank you so much for writing this and continue the great work. I wish there were better ways to show my love for this but, alas, ffnet makes it limited. You are awesome and I love the way you write Yuri and Flynn. Keep up the fantastic work
Sturmgeschuts chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Thumbs up!

Finally, I've waited for a non-romance with these two in depth!

I honestly don't see any romantic chemistry between the two, but this clearly illustrates the type of friendship they DO have.

I thank you.

-Sturm