|Reviews for Lead Me Not Into Temptation|
| StormDragonfly chapter 6 . 10/28/2010
I had wondered why Edward was mentioned earlier in the story as being needed, and I was glad to have me answer in this chapter. His advice is very profound and I enjoyed it very much.
Prepared myself for Cassy, thanks for the warning.
| StormDragonfly chapter 5 . 10/28/2010
I'm a bit surprised by the reuse of Edward's actions in Carlisle here. Very happy the kiss happened in the clearing. Like the loss of scent touch at the end.
| StormDragonfly chapter 4 . 10/28/2010
Yay, good for Bella for figuring it out. I chuckled merrily at the idea of moose tasting like maple syrup.
(As a human in a fairly rural northern state, and a woman recently over the first trimester yucks, I can assure you that the scent of moose is nothing like maple syrup. I was literally driven out of my mother-in-law's house this summer when she started to cook the stuff.)
| StormDragonfly chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
Wow! I was completely not expecting to have Carlisle suck Bella's blood into his mouth in the middle of a public cafeteria. Nice surprise, thank you. :) I'm a little confused whether he swallowed at the end there, since he was deliberately not swallowing at first.
Looking forward to his next encounter wieth Bella. Lucky me, it's already posted!
| StormDragonfly chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
I'm enjoying the time progression of this story, and that the elevator moments didn't turn into an active scene so much as a building block for the rest of the story.
I enjoyed Carlisle's surprise at being asked to lunch and Bella's awkward explanation. :)
| StormDragonfly chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Ahh... this is nice and refreshing and just what I needed today. Hopefully I'll be able to finish the whole story tonight. :)
| KT8812 chapter 8 . 10/28/2010
Devastatingly beautiful story!
| Mrs. Giselle Cullen chapter 8 . 10/17/2010
Oh, I really liked this story!
| whitegurl2013 chapter 8 . 10/11/2010
this story was sad and happy at the same time. cant wait to read more if there is going to be.
| CCisGod chapter 8 . 10/7/2010
ohmygod okay Im not lying when I say that I nearly cried when reading about Cassy. It's true; even big girls cry (okay that sound lame& Cliche but...)
I loved it.
&Struggling Carlisle is my favourite; he is determined yet still thoughtful.
write more, please.
| doctorcullen chapter 8 . 10/6/2010
Read this for the first time today and thought it was lovely. Leaving my love xo.
| Mrs. DrMcSparkly chapter 8 . 9/7/2010
What an absolutely beautiful story! So full of emotions. I am glad Carlisle got his happy ever after! And Cassy..wow, what a brave little girl! Thank you sharing this wonderful story!
| Carlisle's Mate chapter 8 . 9/7/2010
One of the most beautiful Bella and Carlisle stories I have read, and definitely the first to make me cry! Stunning. Thank you!
| bringified chapter 8 . 8/6/2010
this is such a beautiful and heart-warming story, i'm glad to have come across it. )
| slythernightowl chapter 8 . 7/19/2010
Wow, this story was so beautiful and so sad. I loved it very much. Thank you so much for writing it.