ouch - not a good fan. Enjoyed the Abby/Tony dynamic,

Awesome story!

I really enjoyed reading this. I love the relationship between Abby and Tony; I love the others, too, but the friendship between them really stood out. Avery and his brother were skin-crawlingly creepy and evil. I'd imagine that the Nazi doctors who experimented on camp prisoners must have viewed the prisoners in much the same way that Avery viewed Tony - as a *thing*, rather than a person. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us.

*pokes author*
You know that cliffies don't really count as fic ending, don't you?

Tony's being so funny, it's hilarious!

I've been waiting for this story for a while, and I wasn't disappointed :) I loved reading it and I'm only sorry it's too late for me to start the next one.

Okay in this chapter there is only a few mistakes like misspelled words but other than that i enjoy reading your series. Oh by the way, Gibbs has icy blue eyes not steely grey.

Really love your story and I will continue in a bit..just one thing:

""That he would want you to blame yourself for not finding him.""

I think you meant, not blaming, right? ;)

You know I wasn't sure I was going to like this, even though I love sci-fi, but I did. I am REALLY hoping that the next story shows Tony in the really strong Sentinel role playing out his protection of the Tribe. I would really like to see him strong and usuing all his powers! Keep up the Great work!

I have enjoyed your story so far and am looking forward to the rest of it. I can not mark it as a favorite right now. My computer got a power surge and I can not log in. I am looking forward to more. right now your story and several others are on my desktop and I check them periodically.

Keep writing.

Tracy

Enjoyed this fic greatly - looking forward to more. Like the Sentinel storylines - read a couple in the Stargate Atlantis fandom. Like your Sentinel Tony!

Hooray!

*ahhh* *leaning back in satisfaction* They got out. I hope they're careful in talking to Jim and Blair, but odds are the connection's already been traced. Blair is going to flip. Urg. Hmm. Well have a nice break. Texas seems to be a conference state. I've talked to someone else who went down there for a conference as well.

Wonderful to get more of this fic and this is a great ending with a lovely loose end that I'm looking forward to being addressed in the near future. Love how Abby is just trying so hard to help Tony and doing whatever she can to stop him from hurting. Very cool idea to use a sensory deprivation tank to help Tony control the flashback and scary hint that he was going to wind up there anyway. Abby tried her best to get thru to Avery but he isn't seeing Tony as human at all. Love the rescue and terrific choice for the first in the door; McGee is maturing into a wonderful agent and Gibbs was there to back him up. Very tidy that the Avery brothers are dead and can't talk but the mystery man is a huge concern. Love how well Gibbs is taking care of Tony and how well Tony is taking care of Abby. She needs some reassurance as well. Looking forward to the next fic! So sorry to hear about your bird; it is so easy to get attached and so hard when they go.

I'm so sorry to hear about your bird. I have parakeets and as loud and obnoxious as they can be sometimes, I can't imagine the house without them.

I so loved this story. So love that it is part of a bigger story. Avery was such a good bad guy. Not being able to see Tony as still human, he really didn't understand what he was doing was wrong. I'm almost sorry you killed him off. Cannot wait to read the sequel. Maybe there will be more Gibbs-Tony guide-sentinel interaction?

Hope you have a good rest and have fun at your conference.