good story, always makes you think of what goes through the mind during time of distress and trials...it is what determines our character

Good job. I like the wrap up for that episode. That episode should have gone into the aftermath like this.

Gina, I love your writing! I just love it. You can really get into McGarrett's head. Great story! So happy to rediscover your fiction. I thought you wrote more old 5-0 stuff, if so, where's the rest! You are so talented, thanks for sharing your work!

Excellent reading, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you

I enjoyed your description of an early Steve/Danno working their way around each other. Friendship is such a scary responsibility! Now that Steve has realized how far Danny's gotten beyond his shields he's going to have to deal with it, eh? Thank you once again for your writing.

A wonderful story! I always wished that episode could have continued after the rescue!

Ah bliss...Steve and Danny friendship and some missing elements from one of my favorite episodes...what more could one ask for? The line- "I knew you would come for me." - says it all really. So nice.

This was a great story to read. I love the way Steve feels about Danny. Its like they are brothers. I look forward to reading more stories from you.