|Reviews for iLost|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
This was seriously like the cutest thing ever. I loved it. :)
| Sophie Catlyn chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
It feels so...incomplete. I hate it when stories end, but they don't actually "end" :-p
| Anon chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
That's pretty damn adorable. Keep 'em coming please!
| JamesTheGreater chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
CRITICIZE! CRITICIZE! CRITICIZE!
Haha, just kidding.
This is a great way of killing blocks. Little one-shots to stimulate the senses.
Even though it was short, it did the job. Great fic. The ending didn't resolve Freddie's problem but rather gave promises of the future.
| dothepepperminttwist chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
i love the end, adorable :)
| GUEST chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
In one sentence...ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME! good come back but then again your stories always on point. but dont you dare end iJust Dont know...its like still the best story on here and if you do you need to start brainstorming for a prequal sequal the whole nine yards thats a series waiting to happen and it deserves that kind of treatment. call it your exclusive cause dont nobody come close. keep it up, this is a hot start to something good but do not i repeat DO NOT end iJust Dont Know with ONE MORE CHAPTER. That story can go but for every possible time frame that it came from and led up too, it can turn into MANY different stories and FUCK THAT OUT OF CHARACTER stuff the way I see it they have to grow sometime and you got it dead on...do it like only you can...once i finish my first colledge semester i hope to write on par with you. YOUR AWSOME DUDE, keep it up
| Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
He should have asked her "Why don't you ask Mike Watson to pay for your smoothie?"
| myjumpingsocks chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
You liar. "It's terrible," "It sucks so be warned".
IT WAS GOOD YOU NUB! There were lots of sweet lines, and I really liked the way you presented Freddie's POV, and how optomistic you made him. His idea to ask her to the prom was very sweet, an excellent idea that would end in only slight pain for him
Loved this line:
I really didn't pay attention, because I knew that so long as I could still get her going, I would have a chance to tell her that she replaced Carly in my life a long time ago.
Especially from were because is, to going, because that's an excellent point. As long as he can hold her attention, he's pleased.
| pigwiz chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
HA HA! How cute was that!Excellent theme buddy! The usual, with a twist of lemon for flavor!
| Kpfan72491 chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Great story :)
| fizzypurple chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
aww porr Freddie...
loved it btw