Reviews for Racing
Naivette chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Haha, the last line made me laugh. xD Very clever.

But, awww! So cute! I noticed something familiar about the hospital scene. ;D But altogether, you did a great job, my friend! The action at the beginning really kept me interested, and I think it gave me some inspiration for a new story. :)

Great job!
Luxuria De'Voire chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Oh my goodness. I can't describe how much I loved this story. The emotions were brought out very well, even I, being a total serious reader, had tears well up in my eyes just from Kairi's sorrow near the end. The snuggling part was so cute and adorable; I want to snuggle with a guy now ;_; Anyway, magnificent job, and I hope to see more of your writings in this genre!