|Reviews for to see the world in a grain of sand|
| Callista252 chapter 1 . 7/18
I really like this story, thank you for sharing it with us. Your characterisation is just so perfect!
| 4leafclover0120 chapter 1 . 2/8
This was very sweet
| Morbid DramaQueen10 chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
So cute! I've never read any Prince of Persia pieces before, I am glad this is my first.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Beautiful, just beautiful. I love the writing style, I love the characterization, I love Dastan's absolute adoration of Tamina and Tamina's slowly growing affection for him.
| thetinroof chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
This is so beautiful! I Loved it. :)
| Lania26 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
This story is fantastic. You really excel at the dialouge and also some of the imagery you use is phenomenal...I can feel and see the love between them that you depict, I hope you keep writing because you're very good.
| Amber Ice Fox chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Super cute oneshot! I'm glad I stumbled upon it!
| partlysunny chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
That was beautiful! Thank you!
| Galatians 5.16 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
There's something obviously sombre about this fic, the way you patched bits of the movie elements into the story. I have to say, the part when Dastan takes Tamina's hand and says, "Have I ever told you about the Ngbaka?" breaks my heart every time. In fact, a lot of the other pieces are just so... angsty and lovely at the same time, I wonder why I haven't cried yet from the sheer subtlety and beauty of the way you wrote this story. I did find one part a bit too dramatic (-when Dastan got kicked in the head by a horse-) and I thought the story would still be as powerful without it, but that's more of my personal preference than anything else.
After two years, I still love this movie very much and your fic has been a splendid read. Interesting title, by the way.
| brickroad16 chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
I don't know what to say except I love this story. I remember reading it after I first saw the movie, and it's still as great a read now as it was then. Dastan and Tamina are recognizable yet understandably different, but their rapport is still lovely to read. This is a believable and sweet follow-up to the end of the movie. Thanks so much for writing. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Ooo, nicely done! Very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!
| sisana chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
Loved it :)
| Ichiume chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Aaaaah, sweetness and completeness.
Love this fic! Thanks for sharing with us readers!
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I loved this short, little story. It captures the characters well, but I think Tamina is a little more feisty than how you portray her. Overall, I thought it was cute and ended up wanting to read more.
| Lady Gwenevire chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
This is excellent. I love the way you portray Dastan and Gasiv's relationship. My favorite scenes, I think, are when Tamina bets Dastan away, and where she saves him after the horse kicks him. I was not expecting the latter at all.