Reviews for Ruin
Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
You have an absolutely beautiful way with words! I love your creative descriptions, your insightful takes on the characters and Seto's feelings, and the philosophical nature of your story. It's such a treat to read a story as good as yours. I particularly love this line:

"All he's ever known is the rust of metal and the cold of the night, and those things will continue to decay as he stays the same."

"The rust of metal and the cold of the night" that, right there, is a beautiful and elegant way to describe Seto's barren life and ignorance that life could be any other way.

Keep up your amazing writing!
heylalaa chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
wow! really great... and such a strong emotion that you described here. it's really powerful and - i love it. :)
Mouse-Mouse chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
This was so bittersweet. It fits Seto so well, and the imagery you use of the places in the game is beautiful. It's so nice to read something about PF, and I like the 'machines are as fragile as humans' theme.

I really hope you write more for Fragile, you capture it so well!