|Reviews for Cornered|
| DeadHeadBand chapter 23 . 11/27
Me: WHAT! WHAT! WHAT! WHAT DOES IT MEAN THAT HE CRIES FOR THE LAST TIME! DOES HE KILL HIMSELF!?
Lord Death: ...
| DeadHeadBand chapter 22 . 11/27
(If Kid, Stein, Lord Death, Maka, and Spirit were reading this)
Lord Death: Stein stay away from my son
Stein: Can't even take a joke
Kid: I have been scarred for life
Maka: GET OFF ME!
Spirit: OH MAKA! IM SO GLAD YOU'RE SAFE!
| DeadHeadBand chapter 21 . 11/27
(If Stein, Maka, and Kid were reading this)
Last Time: Kid: YOU ASYMMETRICAL PERVERTED PETOPHIAL BITCH!
Stein: Hey Kid wait up why don't we "act out" the fanfiction
Kid: NEVER WITH A FACE AS ASYMMETRICAL AS THAT
Maka: Must. Finish. Reading.
Soul(just cuz it's cool): Seriously you will read anything.
Maka: GET AWAY AND DONT DRUG ME!
Soul: Geez what are you even reading?
| DeadHeadBand chapter 20 . 11/27
(If Stein and Kid were reading this)
Stein: Heh, I kinda like this story.
Kid: YOU WHAT!
Stein: Kid, where are you going?
Kid (faint voice cuz he's walking away): GOODBYE YOU ASYMMETRICAL PERVERTED PETOPHIAL BITCH!
| DeadHeadBand chapter 19 . 11/27
(If Spirit and Lord Death were reading the fanfiction)
Spirit: MY MAKA SAVED KID! OH MAKA IM SO PROUD OF YOU!
Lord Death: REAPER CHOP!
| DeadHeadBand chapter 18 . 11/27
Uuuh major confusion Maka that you?
| DeadHeadBand chapter 14 . 11/27
I know how Lord Death feels like who would dare hurt him. Poor Kid, *continues reading*
| DeadHeadBand chapter 4 . 11/26
Omigawd but for some reason I like it when my favorite character is the uke sooooooo I was pretty happy but then again myrrh
I'm like you I can't say IT but I can write it
| DeadHeadBand chapter 2 . 11/26
Nyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh heh heh I personally love yaoi don't blame me at first it was an accident but it be good so far
| DeadHeadBand chapter 1 . 11/26
So uuuh is uuuh Soul gonna like
Do something bad cuz uh that's weird XD
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/26
I thought death couldn't leave death city
| EricWhiteBlood chapter 23 . 11/25
this is the saddest story i have ever read because i have also been raped by my 16 year old cousin when i was 12. and this just just made me cry when i read the last bit. you broke my heart since my favorite character was and always will be death the kid it was to much pain and sadness in my heart from this story. the last part will stay in my heart forever. i will always cry now, i will have to buy many boxes of tishus now, but anyways you did a really good job. P.S. i am over emotional so yeah and i'm 13 now. i never will get over the fact that i was raped but i will keep pushing forwards and head for the light and i hope you have a beutifull and sun shinny day.
| HetalianOtaku chapter 23 . 11/19
Holy. Shit. That was heavy with feels.… I LOVE IT! Oh god I'm problemed aren't I? Oh well. I enjoyed reading. Just. Just. There is something wrong with me...
| justalostotaku chapter 23 . 8/4
Oh my, this story was so good. I love and hate the ending at the same time. It was just too sad for me to handle but it was really good. Great story!
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 23 . 8/2
Poor poor Kid. He died from what happened to him. That happens to people I heard that went through tramatic stuff. And I forgot to ask in the last chapter. What happened to Liz and Patty after the first chapter in the pub when they saw that actor that they liked?