Reviews for A Hundred Percent
princesshyuuga01 chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
OMG I love this! So cute and funny! Itachi is the reason behind Tenten's perfect aim! Awwww! I love the narration! Hilarious stuff! Poor Sasuke, nii-san ditched him for Tenten. OMG was Itachi ogling Tenten? Hahahhahahaha xD "Cute little thing with the hair buns" killed me lmao xD

Your A/N was funny. :'O Lol! He killed her entire family for warm up just so he could massacre the Uchihas looool! As twisted as that it. Its funny as hell! Very lovely descriptions!

Itachi has traumatized poor Tenten hahhhha ;) Cant believe he used his Mangekyo on her hahahhahah! Strict Senpai!

Tenten is so cute!
Dreaming101 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Hahaha! Great job on this
Onileo chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Adorable! Thank you. :)
Archontruth chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Good lord that's adorable.
KiyumiArashi chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
Haha! :D I remember this now! I love her apology! Plus the way that Itachi idolizes his ponytail :)
So that's what Itachi was doing when he was too busy to train Sasuke!
Ryuuketsu No Bara chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
TRUE! that's why they don't say how Tenten's family died, it just was so traumatic that the author couldn't bear to write it...
Azurii chapter 1 . 4/24/2012
This explains perfectly what happened to Tenten's parents, the poor girl. Though I must say this story has got to be one of the funniest I've ever read, and your author notes as well.
wlkwos chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Short, economical, and very, very funny. I am very happy that I had just finished my tea when I started reading this, because otherwise there would have been a disaster involving my laptop and tannin stains and possibly irreparable damage. Stories like this are why I love crackfics! The idea is completely crazy, and yet it works so very, very well - and shines a spotlight on a much-neglected side character to boot.

The ficlet is positively littered with wonderful lines and images. Itachi "[s]inging doo wa dee a deedee dum deedee-" sets the tone for what is to come. The image of a light-hearted, angst-free Itachi humming to himself as he walks along is incongruous in the extreme - and then it is abruptly cut off. (Sort of pun there; I like bad puns; I'm shameless.) Humour comes from the unexpected, after all. And speaking of unexpected, Tenten's apology made me laugh, because it was both not what I thought it would be, but at the same time, yes, oh, yes, it was perfect, because everyone knows and comments on the fact that Itachi is too pretty to be a man.

It's hard to talk about standout lines and the like, because the fic is so short and economical. Every line does exactly what it needs to, and almost every line is hilarious. There's Itachi's overreaction to Tenten's frantic attempts to dig herself out of the rapidly deepening hole, which is described indirectly and is cleverly left to the imagination, and Sasuke's private views on his brother's new haircut, funny because innocently spot-on. And it was a stroke of genius leaving Itachi's interaction with Tenten in the final scene as dialogue. Poor little Tenten. No wonder she blocked the memory of it out.

I am always amazed when people can tell an entire story with such precision and clarity, packing so much into a few carefully chosen sentences - in this case so much laughter. The story starts out well, and only gets better, and is a wonderful, mad, awesome explanation for Tenten's perfect aim. A definite favourite!
Ekun-Asha chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
O lenu. XD
Charice-Claire-Vizziny chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
HAHAHA I can't imagine what would it looked like if Itachi's hair becomes short! Sooo funny! Keep writing. Sorry I'm late...
Ioga chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
I laughed out loud at "I'm very sorry ma'am". Oh man, that was brilliant.

I'm sure Itachi subconsciously allowed the kunai to hit its target because of his natural masochistic trait to get himself into impossible situations. It's totally in-character.

On a random note, it took my sleepy mind several minutes to figure out what the "Thwunk. Thwunk. Thwunk." really was. I'm going to have disturbed dreams about the other options that came to mind now. (And then I'll write disturbed fanfiction about them. Like that time when Naruto had died and Code Geass's gray-haired knight/teacher woman had control over reincarnating/cloning him at the fixed age with a snap of her fingers. And she was using it to teach him manners in lethal ways when he annoyed her; it was kind of reminescent of his kage bunshin, really. He was even learning stuff his earlier reincarnations had experienced and was trying to hide it from her... I was barely saved from making a plot out of that, by getting distracted in time.)
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I really liked this!
croquette queen chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Haha- I think this is a perfectly plausible theory. If this had happened in canon I could die happy.
skidtick chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
This is such a great story!

Great line: It would not be until much, much later that he would succeed in activating the Mangekyo Sharingan, but on that day, Itachi came very close.

Love the little training scene. The mood there was just so perfect. The crying... the way your hand hurts... the way someone is standing behind you saying "once more". Honestly, it reminds me of my younger days in Kumon or my younger days reciting the multiplications table. Again and again! I shudder.

"Tenten bawled".

That part was brilliant... training under Itachi can be a truly traumatizing experience huh?

Great crack.

SushiLover656 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Cuteness. Couldn't train Sasuke. Far too busy training Tenten. And mocha, but of course. XD
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