Reviews for Trifle
saltyavocado chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Oh wow, this is just awesome. HOW DO BRILLIANT WRITERS THINK OF IDEAS LIKE THESE. I never even thought about what it must have been like for Amy during extraterrestrial menaces to our current timeline. Tone of the piece was lovely, with all its lightness and fluffiness and wonderful jabs of humor. And, of course, Minister Jones' bombshell. I'm sitting here typing this with a grin on my face, enzymion. Kudos to you. :D
Erie-danna chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
This is just too cute for words, honestly!

You handled the present tense writing very well, and the characterization is spot on, especially Amy's stubborn enthusiasm and Rory's awkwardness.

Oh, and the tampon bit was hilarious. :D
Shella chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Bwahaha, this is so them. Characterisation win through and through! And far too many awesome little details to note them all - special mention to Amy's successful fish-fingers-and-custard recipe! As for present-tense, the only awkwardness I noted was after the PM's speech, a couple of "was"es probably should have been "is"es. Maybe also "That look never boded well," but they're both borderline. Yeah, present tense is difficult.

On the other hand, the background progress of Aunt Sharon provided hilarious punctuation and framing. More win!
BananaBabe903 chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
HAHAHA I LOVED THIS! :) Brilliantly written and very clever. I love this. Great work!
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Awesome yes it is _
queenoftheoutlands chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
You are made of win.

Honestly. Have some internets and fresh cookies just for THINKING of this idea because... Genius