|Reviews for Not Another Mary Sue|
| demee chapter 2 . 9/25/2011
this is awesome! PLEASE UPDATE
| LadyxAbsinthe chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
lol you got an intersting story here, I can't wait to see what happens next. But, as friendly advice from one writer to another, you should add more detail in your discriptions.
| MMM.FIRE chapter 2 . 6/3/2011
Love it so far! It is still a little mary-sue-esque, but it's a nice take on it all the same. I hope you'll update soon, though. (Sorry... their must be loads of people nagging you)
| lily chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
This is still a Mary-Sue, not a girly one no, but still a Mary-Sue, If not for the plot of trying not to be one than the bad adittude which is most common in badass Mary-sues.
| Vashti chapter 2 . 11/26/2010
This is fun! And very different from the plethora of dripped-into-Middle-Earth stories. It looks like you've let it go, but it's definitely nifty and I'd love to see more of it.
| CelticRoseOfTheLake chapter 2 . 11/16/2010
That my lovely, is all.
PS: i was wrong i have more to say.
This whole idea makes me very happy and i love the way you are going about with it. I can not wait to read more from you now. Also i adore the cheeky voice your words have C:
| Becky chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
wkd keep going! I like a laugh!
Something to consider too, I live near a garden centre called Rivendale...just thought i'd share that :)
| Senda Kenobi chapter 2 . 6/5/2010
Ok, this has the potential to be absolutely hilarious. Keep up the good work!
| jaimealdridge chapter 2 . 6/5/2010
absolutely love this story and your humor. cant wait to read more so update soon plzz )
| Naruchan chapter 2 . 6/4/2010
I love this! I cant wait to see what happens next! Are you going to pair her with Legolas? Even though I like Legomances, I do like to see HaldirOC pairings too!
| Elfwine chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Lol. Werewolf syndrome?
Really good so far. :3
| Lucrezia-Farnese chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
lol, is this a parody or are you taking it seriously?
It's decent enough. I hope the chapters will be much longer. (Yes I intend on following this story).
I like it that you don't have her 'fall into' Middle-Earth. Nice change you have going. I take it you watched back to the future and got this idea? lol, I do that.
At the moment, she doesn't sound like a serious Mary-sue. That self-taught stuff is Mary-sue, but you haven't really described your character enough for me to really make a diagnosis.
Is this going to be a legomance OR a romance with Haldir? OR a love triangle? oh, no don't tell me, I'd rather find out by reading this lol.
I barely read full on Mary-sue stories, so I'm hoping you'll make her a nice, easy (sort of reality type) girl. Oh, but if you describe Emily as the most beautiful girl in the story...bah! Please, just don't lol. At least have some male characters not finding her that pretty. Anyway, I've ranted on enough.