Reviews for My Life as a Ninja
Shinome Akira chapter 25 . 6/11/2012
Please write more! Is there a sequel if this one is finished?
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
this does sound like a Mary Sue... XP
The Deidara Effect chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
No offense, but I strongly believe your OC is a Mary Sue. I know you can't go back and change her since you already uploaded 20 or so chapters, but many of Bailey's traits scream Sue.

1. Her first name is Bailey. English names don't belong in the Naruto world. I suggest finding the meaning of "Bailey" and then finding the Japanese word for it.

2. I know it's a fan fic, but a Hyuga/Uchiha hybrid isn't really possible. Especially one that's a sister to Sasuke, Itachi, and Neji and carries the powers of both kekkei genkai.

3. A twelve-year old Jounin. I know some other canon characters accomplished something similar to that, but don't you think it's enough that she has two kekkei genkai (and even though I didn't get this far) a demon?

4. Now a twelve-year old Jounin, smarter than Shikamaru, with a demon ... in Akatsuki.