Holly would not act like THAT! First she just said she wouldn't judge (and we all know elves are honest and emotional) Second she did kiss him in TTP...so

dude, plot wise great. However, I now absolutely hate you for the last few sentences.

"Her reaction was immediate. She pushed Fowl away and started Gaging and wiping her lips. Fowl kissed her? Eww! She stormed down the halls of the sub pod, moving quickly, making sure that she was never in Artemis's sight again. She really didn't care now what happened to Fowl. All he was to her, after that kiss, was just a sick physcotic monster."

The fact that holly dissed him in the last sentence was horrible.

The fact that holly gagged after the kiss made me scream.

At the end I was screaming and crying at what YOU did.

I cannot express how much I absolutely hate this story.

It was ...

I have no words to describe it.

* ha ha. Okay, dripping irony here .*

It was amazing. It was all I ever wanted to write (:

It was exactly what I always thought : Atlantis complex was Artemis's punishment

about being silent. Because he didn't told Holly how he feels ... He went crazy.

I meant to write something like that - but now there's no point, because your's SO much better.

You call that an ending? Crap.

awesome fic ;)

Just one word: AWW!

That was cute. I'd have loved seeing Holly's reaction, but it was quite good in my opinion!

Yeah thats good- but what is this Kitsune Heart competition? this is the second story I've read for it!

Never thought I'd see the day.

Oh my gods, so good. Pink Floyd is my FAVOURITE band so I could picture this so well. I love it how David Gilmore got his guitar to talk in this song. It's awesome. Anyway...i think that the song fit really well. I was actually thinking of doing a song fic for the competition so I hope you won't think I stole your idea. I'm doing mine to one of Radiohead's. Airbag to be precise. I'm definitely going to vote for you.