hey i reallllllly love this story... its so reallistic and i love how you give tips at the top of each chapter for authors :) thanks

LadyAiredonelle

Nothing in particular to say about this chapter. I liked it, though!

ruh oh, wargs maybe? Great update and yes, I agree. In my mind she is the normal human being. Non descriptive hair, normal looking eyes, normal looking everything. Instead of glowing (pick a color any color) hair, sparkling (insert color of choice here) eyes and a voluptuous body.

I love how you did not leave the realistic details of her journey: hunger, fear, body conditions, danger from encounter with strangers, and inability to understand the language. Thanks for continuing to update. Your story is one of the better quality fanfics I've ever read.

Another good chapter. I think you are doing a great job with the realistic girl-falls-into-middle-earth thing. Anyone who is complaining probably wanted another one of those horrible Marry Sue stories that I hate.

I wonder what grabbed her shoe and where it went? I also can't wait to find out what happens next. I think I know where she's headed, but it will beinteresting to see how you work her into the lotr story once you get to that point. I know there is still quite a way before that, but I am really enjoying reading about all the aspects of medieval life she is having to become accustomed to. I think it is very interesting. Please update soon!

-sigh- I am currently without my map of M.E. and am having trouble figuring out where she's going.

Oh well.

I love the description of her talking to the ranger. It made me laugh for some odd reason... :D

I'm loving this story! You're writing it realistically and believably which is awesome. Also, it's so fun to whip out my atlas and guess at where she's heading. So far I haven't been too far off. Can't wait to see if I'm right this time!

This story is wonderful! It really is. So far, I really love Maddie, and the way she reacts and deals with the situation she's in is very realistic. I love your descriptive writing, it really brings the place to life! Your writing flows well, and the story is a pleasure to read. I can't wait for your next update!

This story is really beginning to grow on me. It's a slow-starter, and the main character really is as painfully dependent on modern conveniences as you might expect from a 100% city girl, but the pacing, attention to detail and secondary characters are all wonderful. I look forward to the next update.

Feels good to read a realistic "fall into Middle-Earth story"

Very well written too! :)

Yay! It IS realistic!1

Awwww. I like this story so far. Nice and realistic. Wonder when she'll meet the elves. Sad to admit, but I can't wait for some romance. XD Update soon!

ahhh haha sorry i wasnt signed in when i reviewed your story (just had so much on my mind i wanted to say about it) but im katie, the review below this one :)

SAWP. this is prolly the best insert ive read so far! ITS SO DESCRIPTIVE. and nothing in this story is taken for granted, if you know what i mean! as in no magical benefits to Maddie or anything weirdly inhumanly impossible happens to her :) i like how you describe her hardships such as her road trip and how much she sweats. not to sound weird or anything but thats a great detail to add into your story, it made it sound very down to earth like:D! You added a great deal of mixed characters in your story to! i liked bromley and the people from Fornot and the innkeeper haha- very different yet it makes the story so much more real. I liked how Bromley was an antagonist in this story that, again, made the story seem more realistc:) I also REALLY REALLY like how Maddie doesnt head off and meet the main characters of LOR first off- i despise inserts where your character right away becomes famous . ONE MORE THING LOL. i really like how she cant understand the language! it adds the the realism of her situation. Overall i really liked how you planned your story out:) i read your Green Dreams story also and have it bookmarked LOL. ITS SO GOOD aiegtahojnmlakohy i cant even begin to describe the intuiging plot you give it, the details, how they all tie in together! i would love to pick your mind apart one day xD

i ramble sorry, haha but i just wanted to say GREAT JOB. keep updating! and dont ever lose your fantastic writing ability/ imagination:)

i dont usually leave reviews but i thought maybe my words would mean something to you haha:)3

This story is the best girl-gets-dropped-into-LotR I've ever read. Ever. And I quite understand the frustration she's feeling at not being able to understand anything. I hope she learns the language soon.