liking it so far :)

I'm impressed with the realism of her situation so far. Great job! Keep it up!

i really like this! You do a great job of keeping the mentality real, I hate when people show up in middle earth and know that that's what happened. Looking forward to an update!

Awesome! Very well written and I am looking forward to reading more of this. I gotta say, I love the irony of her thoughts. Oh how she has no idea..

Thank you for writing a logical story. I look forward to reading more.

Some excellent OC in Middle-earth stories which are old enough that you might not have read them:

boz4PM's "Don't Panic!" and its sequel "Okay, Now Panic!" The first several chapters aren't much fun; if you don't enjoy them, just skim until they meet up with whichever son of Elrond it is; the story - and the main character - are much saner after that. The scene in which Penny explains her origin is brilliant.

Radbooks' "In Aragorn's Safekeeping" and its sequel. Two American teens from the early 1950s survive a bus crash (or did they?) and are found by the Fellowship.

i love this story already;pleascontinue really really really really really really really really really really soon pleasse! thankies!;D

This is a good beginning, and I see a lot of potential in this story. I look forward to reading more.

Keep up the good work! :)

Wow, this is really well done :)

I agree fully with your Writer's note. I kind of did that. I wrote my own.

I like you spelling, grammar. If you have naturally good grammar etc..I'm glad you still have a beta. They are great for a second opinion. Your category is not romance, so I take it your character isn't going to become romantically involved?

I'd love to continue reading this! Also, I absolutely love long chapters lol. So I'm glad your putting in the extra effort to add detail etc.

Praise !

lol. Good luck!