What a beautiful story. Truly touching. Madrid was very well written, and I love how her romance with Boromir felt so natural and well paced.

This was so God damn good! Thank you so much for writing this!

MusicalMythology's review just about sums up my thoughts on your story. Thank you for a very entertaining read!

Well, I am impressed. You managed to make first-person, OC-centered, cliché premise story that somehow, incredibly, manages to be amazing. This story is refreshing, realistic, entertaining and well-written, and I found myself enjoying it immensely. I loved the way you didn't shy away from the ugly side of medieval cities and the reality of living in those times, and Maddie's place in the story was very well picked, as she made definite changes but didn't steal the spotlight or take on ridiculous importance to the quest. Well done on writing such a good story!

Thank you for the time and care you've put into this story and for bringing it to its completion (unlike some authors). It's been a great read, and I'm glad to have found a story that wasn't riddled with spelling/grammar mistakes. ;) Love the chapter! XD

Hopefully her family has done something similar/feel the same. Love the chapter! XD

Fair enough. ;) Love the chapter! XD

Perfect. ;) Love the chapter! XD

Sounds good to me. ;) Love the chapter! XD

Actually, the Wizard of Oz would support the argument of the usefulness/necessity of (relatively) empty titles. I guess I can forgive her mistake in this case since she hasn't seen the movie/read the book in a while. ;) Love the chapter! XD

Much better. ;) Loving the end of the chapter! XD

This misplaced guilt for forced tension is getting really annoying, but it was a good chapter otherwise.

I love it! XD I mean, the forced tension was annoying (nobody get out of life alive, of course she only delayed his death. That's all anyone can do/is doing), but it was a good chapter otherwise!

Dun-dun-duuuuuuuuuuun! ;) Love the chapter! XD

Sounds like a party. ;) Love the chapter! XD