Reviews for Home with the Fairies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i. absolutely. love. this. story! I check it all the time, because i read this on my iPod touch, so it was too hard to log in and add this to story alerts, but... wow. i can't tell you how much i love to see that you've updated ! as I was reading, i felt what you were trying to portray, i could just... they're so unnatural, yet .. I think what would've gone through my mind was authoritative, and they have those bloody aura's that just scream 'I'm amazing, bow to me' although they're nice people...elves... yea. anyway, I would also like to know that story so was, so if by chance you do find it, let us know what it was in the next chapter! ...which will be soon. Please:) till next time! ~sam |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent update. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hello! the story is amazing! it sounds so real..! it is a very different story from the rest i've read and i'm already thrilled to find out what will happen in the future... upload soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello there! This story is going straight to my favorites! You have done an amazing job at making things realistic. I love the idea! It's good, making the story sound and believable should always be important to the author. Personaly I think she has been too lucky don't get me wrong she has had her share of suffering but still getting posioned or something would be good. I Loved her reaction to the elf! So true to human nature consdering her condition. I'm a little sad to know you updated just yesterday. The best compliment I can give you is that you've won a fan on a first read. In my case that's not too common. Have a great day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks good to me. I doubt anyone's ever fainted on the doorstep of Imladris before, so...I'm certainly happy. "Sure, it might not be too much good against a wolf's claws and teeth or a bear's sheer size, but at least I'd hit the bastard pretty damn hard before he took me down." Hear, hear! : ) Oh, yeah, this ought to be good. I can hardly wait. *settles in* See you soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved her reaction to the elf (Glorfindel?) It was very realisic. Perfection? I think so! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, great, not a cliff hanger. lol So, I was just wondering, is this Trahern fellow Aragorn? Or some other ranger? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall an interesting fix. However water is carried in a water skin. A skein is a length of thread or yarn wound in a coil or around something. It would be impossible to carry water in it. I am looking forward to the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall an interesting fix. However water is carried in a water skin. A skein is a length of thread or yarn wound in a coil or around something. It would be impossible to carry water in it. I am looking forward to the next chapters. |
![]() ![]() This is the most well-written, realistic 'falling-into-middle-earth' fic I've ever read. Keep up the good work! I'm anxiously awaiting your next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I want to say that I rather appreciate your lack of description of Maddie (at least once I noticed it, that is). You're right, that adds to the realistic aspect of it. Personally, I picture her semi-tall/thin with light brown hair and darker eyes, but I think the freedom to imagine whatever you want it very cool. Now to the actual story: I like the turns this story is taking: the appearance of Aragorn and Weathertop, and also the fact that Maddie doesn't understand any of it. It's nice to see these things from the perspective of a person who doesn't know the first thing about either of them, and yet picks up on so much. (I especially liked the language swap!) Unfortunately, that's about where the happy things end. Getting your period in the wilderness? Yeesh. Don't want to think about that. Not to mention the forest and the wolves. Thanks for another terrific update! I hope to see you soon! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blessed Be! I am liking your story so far. I like that you've put so much realism into it (So many other stories don't). And the gross moments are suitably... Well, gross. I do think I shouldn't be so grossed out by them, since I revel in watching Leon get killed in Resident Evil 4 (Which is very gory, I might add.) May the Goddess be with you this fine day, Naea |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed reading this story so far. :D I love how you've kept Maddie as universal as possible and this is certainly the most 'realistic girl-falls-into-M.E. story' I've read in a long time. Have you read the 'Panic!' series by boz4PM? I think you'd really enjoy them. :) I can't wait to see what'll happen to Maddie next. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good! I like the way you've written it so far! 3 I can only imagine how frustrating it would be for me to have to travel by foot everywhere, let alone not be able to communicate. I would be crying every minute of every hour of every day if I were Maddie. Then die in a ditch somewhere. xD I hope you update soon! I look forward to more! :] -CC~Chan |