|Reviews for Sweetheart Island|
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 5 . 3/10
Ehhhhhh still hoping for that kink XD Oh well, not the most satisfying ending but still sweet. Thanks bud
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 4 . 3/10
The captain re-emerged from where his face had been pummeled into the table and continued his story, unfazed by this everyday occurrence.
So I died today.
So I originally searched up ZoroXNami angst but in the archive I found this and it's been a refreshing break from my angst/horror. And I guess I can say I'm hoping for kink in the next chapter, ignoring the critiques i said before. Because this IS a romance fic so...
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 3 . 3/10
I liked Nami's last note. Seems more nakamaship which seems like her down to hesrt. But mow that i think about it, zoro's were more nakamaship too. Even so the wording was off.. Could be more "so no one would kill you" and maybe even add a duh XD
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 2 . 3/10
I'm sure you could do better than have Zoro think random things about why he likes nami. Those occurances are very ooc.
HOWEVER THAT COVERUP WAS PRICELESS IN ITS SELF! XD Now thats more in character. Much like them to bicker but really witty remarks there. ;D
I'm guaranteed that everyone answered what beta (reader) was but its just an editor u can have for your chapters PRIOR to release. you put your story traits up on the beta site (not too sure how it works) and give the standards/req. and what you want them to edit. And then beta readers who specifically edit those areas (ex grammar, character base, etc) will ask u.
| Princess-Orlaith chapter 1 . 3/10
Really interesting idea :D I loove LuRo, but only when Luffy's more sophisticated not jumping around (in this case chopper is there to do that with him :p) and having robin look after him like a mother. Zoro and bami is a faourite because although she doesn't seem his type to me... Thats the exact reason i ship it XD But again, hopefully its all more serious :$
| ptsa chapter 5 . 3/1
Omg love this! 3 more soon pleaseeee :))))
| Anime fan chapter 5 . 1/28
This is really something I think would be an episode in One Piece but my only problem is that I want more to read but so few chapters! T_T please update more if not too much trouble love it so far!
| annie chapter 5 . 1/7
Want more! want more!
| ZoroxNami chapter 5 . 12/7/2013
Good and funny fanfic keep up the good work!
| s.rios3910 chapter 5 . 11/12/2013
I absolutely love your story. I'm a big fan of ZoNa ... Even if my friends don't approve ... I would really like to see more, you're just an awesome writer. Keep going PLEEEAAASSSEEE ! XD
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
like it :) i want to know what kind of relationship they will get
| curlybuddy chapter 5 . 11/5/2013
Love it keep up the good work. But I would really like it if zoro took a shower in the morning or it can be nami
| Iloveonepiece123 chapter 5 . 10/21/2013
Single Blanket Style... Tornado!
Please make more
| Hai chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
Could you make them more quickly and make more as well? I don't have very much time anymore but their reAlly good as well
| Hayyyy chapter 5 . 10/17/2013
This is really good
You need to create more
You're like my new favorite author now
Kk well bi :)