Reviews for Heading Home
scarlet1200 chapter 11 . 4/9
what you might want to try is having a story map so you have an idea of where you want the story to go then you can fill it in from there I find it helps me
random girlz chapter 11 . 11/14/2013
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DeathBeNoMore chapter 11 . 2/19/2012
This story is wonderful despite the lost of your muse. Really it is good. In my opinion, expanding on Saya and Haji's wedding would be nice, or to show how Mao is doing with her baby. Or even about the twins, and them playing "dress up" with Haji. Lol. That was great! That's all I can think of right now. Again really good. Please write more and hope to find inspiration for your story.
Ailovec chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
The idea of this was good however, I think writing it in the past tense would be better.
The Stories of L.B chapter 5 . 7/11/2010
AWESOME XD We did a great job :3
The Stories of L.B chapter 3 . 6/20/2010
I loved this, great!
Ravishing Primrose chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
wow
Ravishing Primrose chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
nice
Ravishing Primrose chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
good
LadyKagome of the north01 chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
wow lol that was so unexspated (srry if i miss spelled it wrong)
The Stories of L.B chapter 2 . 6/6/2010
I love it :D We did good :3
Unknown Person chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
I love that you know have a beta reader. The new first chapter is great. I love the new title.
The Stories of L.B chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
I love it XD We did a good job :D Thanks for mentioning me ;D