|Reviews for Change for Tony|
| JAIMOL chapter 6 . 3/14/2011
A sequel superb. Jeanne shame what was a good woman. Gabriella at least still has his father.
| The Critic chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
It's time for your check-up...
Well, the first thing that pops out is the shift of focus here. This started out Tony-centric, but it's become Gabriella-centric. Please, be consistent, or at least say if you're changing.
And... where's the plot?
I'll be checking up.
| The Critic chapter 2 . 11/2/2010
Okay, I've read through Tony's Surprise, and I must say that this story does show some promise.
Firstly, though, wouldn't Tony be upset that Jeanne died? Maybe they don't have the best past, but it seems as if they were at least friends, and friends do care about each other...
Secondly, I enjoy reading the thoughts of the different characters. It makes them easier to understand.
I'll be checking up!
| angeleyes46 chapter 5 . 8/28/2010
keep up the great work. congrats to your brother
| Annomunus chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
I like your story please continue