In a way kurama is right, naruto was presented as much more 'somber'/war-tempered in this fanfic, but so far he's been pretty much the same canon boy in the way he acts. Kind of frustrating

it feels nothing more than filler ... nothing happened in your story of 17 chapters except erza getting together with naruto.

u really don't know how to write fight scenes do u?

Ah hokage is a shit codename tbh. I never really liked that title.

This fic had potential, but it's gone off track I think.

UPDATE THIS PLSSSS!
I REALLY WAIT LONG ENOUGH FOR THIS BOOK TO BE UPDATE!
SO PLS UPDATE!

Awww it’s over?! I was getting excited for the tower of heaven arc so Naruto can go Sage of the Six-Paths and resurrect Simon from the dead… while unintentionally converting Ultear from worshiping Zeref to worshiping him. Since Meredy goes where Ultear goes, then Grimore Heart will be down 2 members.

The fight was good

Yay lisanna saved

Yeah ppl in fairy tail would have an easier time if they killed bad guys like in naruto

His current goal is more of a dream. You can't find a dragon that doesn't want to be found. For him, the goal I'm giving him is more realistic, and will help him accomplish his dream as well."

Yeah natsu deserves a smack into reality honesrly

Watching over natsu would be a huge pain

Hoh so he is declared as Fairy Tail’s strongest huh... Naruto vs Gildarts would be an epic fight

I think Naruto’s red-skin cloak Mode was weaker in comparison with canon since just 4 tails could level up mountainsin here he went 9 tails skeleton... seems a bit over the tops, specially since he had trouble fighting it

So Naruto is the big brother figure to the young mages huh? Interesting... about stages, if I am not wrong should be: Stage 3Sage Mode, Stage 4Kyuubi Chakra ModeStage 56 Paths Sage Mode Kyuubi Chakra Mode