I can't wait for you to release the next chapter. Update soon :) it's a great story you have here :)

update please...

wait for nest chapter...

omg it's so good XD
if you can...please update :D

this is like...a cliffhanger

I really like this story so far and I hope you update soon. Will Naruto fight the Oracion Seis?

Okay, I thought why Erza was acting all weird from the canon. But 4 years before the canon? zzzz.. Too far back, one year maybe, four year zzzz.

I thought 1 Ryo 10 Yen?... weird.

naruto acutally speciallizes in massdestruction. He is the power of human sacrifice after all. I mean there are only a few things I can think of in fairy tail verse that could stand up to him in full biju mode.

More please. T_T

OMG this is a great story! But I would LOVE to see Naruto to break out his ninja skills on a mission and or try teach it to fairy tail, who will fail miserably will he is able to do it with ease... Sorry if that sounded a bit pushy, I mean this is YOUR story, but ya know just a suggestion. The romance is a bit much for me but I can live. Ok please consider my request! Keep Posting! XD

So naive,so innocent,so pure and sooo IDIOTIC OC. I HATE OC. Naruto is it shinobi,he mustly keep every information for himself. Not tell the other include his past. And why must naruto think how to come back. Though he had no knowledge of space and time ninjutsu and fuinjutsu. And if you say kyubi has the knowledge about space and time ninjutsu,are he want to teach it to naruto.?. Though in this world no one can't controlling him. So,why he want come back if just have to be madara pets again. Should you make naruto a bit more mature and manipulative and mysterious.

This is a great story, please update soon

What happened

Great chapter

Thanks for picking naruto/ erza