Great story and loving the premise, but…. Sigh, you just gave us a Naruto who isn’t a delusional, loud mouthed braggart, only to have him all but adopt another one in the form of Natsu ️.

Really glad that this Naruto is at least capable of killing, Masashi Kishimoto went a bit too far In trying to ensure that Naruto always had the moral high ground, imao.

Don’t get me wrong, I love the Narutoverse but of all its characters, Naruto is the one that grates on me the most.

I enjoyed your story a lot! Thanks for writing it so long ago! Did you ever post the outline of where you had planned to go with it when you quit? Anyway, good job getting as far as you did, I hope real life has treated you well.

Waiting for an idiot to come here and wank foddertail and say an average mage from foddertail will oneshot Naruto at his peak and full power lol.

good

Fire Shadow... A ridiculous and stupid name... Will do my best to try and pretend it isn't. Or just mentally switch it out for Hokage. Sounds better and less middle school that way. Even if it doesn't fit or make sense here. He shouldn't have a title so soon and it shouldn't be one that he picked for himself. That's just dumb... ANYWAYS! Just continue goddamn reading.

In a way kurama is right, naruto was presented as much more 'somber'/war-tempered in this fanfic, but so far he's been pretty much the same canon boy in the way he acts. Kind of frustrating

it feels nothing more than filler ... nothing happened in your story of 17 chapters except erza getting together with naruto.

u really don't know how to write fight scenes do u?

Ah hokage is a shit codename tbh. I never really liked that title.

This fic had potential, but it's gone off track I think.

UPDATE THIS PLSSSS!
I REALLY WAIT LONG ENOUGH FOR THIS BOOK TO BE UPDATE!
SO PLS UPDATE!

Awww it’s over?! I was getting excited for the tower of heaven arc so Naruto can go Sage of the Six-Paths and resurrect Simon from the dead… while unintentionally converting Ultear from worshiping Zeref to worshiping him. Since Meredy goes where Ultear goes, then Grimore Heart will be down 2 members.

The fight was good

Yay lisanna saved

Yeah ppl in fairy tail would have an easier time if they killed bad guys like in naruto