|Reviews for An Unarranged Marriage|
| Harmonic Sniper chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
Ugh finally! Been waiting how long? Lawls anyways j will agree that yes fanfic is more important than those silly little school things that teachers shove down our throats. Its really entertaining I hope for an update soon!
| friggz chapter 3 . 10/18/2011
If it helps (and it better -insert Roxas glare-) you updating this fanfiction would help convince me that /reading/ fanfiction is way more important than trivial things like homework, papers, and practicing musical instruments.
And you /totally left me hanging/! I'm just about ready to stalk though your bio and try and find out where you live, just so I can tell you face to face that you NEED to update this!
...Okay, not really. I wouldn't put that much effort into tracking you down. Maybe, if you put a phone number somewhere, I might find out your area code, but that's it...And now I sound like a stalker...
On that lovely note, this is the best fanfiction I have read in a long time. Your grammar is great, as is your spelling, which gets lots of bonus points from me. I am also very-much-impressed with your knowledge of abstract book titles ;)
Seriously. Update...As soon as possible would be nice. That's ASAP. A-sap. "ae-sap". "ae-es-ae-pee" Like now...And I wanna know what Axel used to blackmail Zexion, too. May I suggest that he and Demyx decided to reenact the Dance without Pants in a manner /very/ similar to Marluxia and Larxene's, and Axel happened to walk in/by/near, hear them, and/or otherwise find out of it? Perhaps Zexion got caught with a Kuma Satra book? I love brainstorming x)
Anywho, that's all folks!
Your friendly neighborhood chinchilla,
| Sensory Overload chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
Ohmigosh. I'm so happy I decided to read this story because I found it buried in one of my favorite author's favorite stories list. Wow... that sentence seems sort of hard to puzzle out when I just read it over again. Well hopefully you understand!
I've never laughed so hard at reading a fanfiction and at some points my eyes actually watered. Haha, especially the part about the porno Roxas statue. I love how your humor is so witty with a touch of pervertedness! It makes it all the more fun to read!
Please do continue to write! I would love to leave a much longer review full with details and such as I usually do with authors, however the parents are calling and I have to leave to stuff myself with turkey and mashed potatoes! So sorry about this tiny short one but I promise I'll make it up to you in the next chapter you write and remember that you have a faithful fan sitting on the sidelines!
| Dreamy Duskywing chapter 3 . 9/2/2011
I nearly died reading these chapters. No, seriously I did. It is currently gone midnight and I am trying to be considerate of my sleeping mother and brothers. I had to stuff a pillow into my mouth to stop myself from laughing out loud. I ended up crying, wheezing and coughing...only to need to repeat the actions a few sentences later!
I adore the way you write. It is fabulous. I can't say how sad it makes me to see such a long time lapse since chapter three was posted and can't help but hope that you will come back to write more! Programming assignments are completely inferior to fanfiction. I would know, I have just completed my second year of a software development course. Programming is the dark side. Join the light of fanfiction!
I love this story so much that I am favouriting it, even though it is not complete. I don't do that very often, I love this! XD
| tig chapter 3 . 8/29/2011
Oh, come on! You have to update! Please? This story is so funny!
| Rocket-Ship-Romance chapter 3 . 4/28/2011
*Whines and paws at*
You haven't in agesssss.
And I want to know what happens after the accidental kiss! :O
| inhx chapter 3 . 4/2/2011
Haha, this story is hilarious and while I find Roxas to be completely unreasonable at times, I just love his reactions and Axel's ridiculous attempts to reconcile. ;)
Please update soon because I AM TOTALLY LOVING THIS! :P
| anonymous chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
I love your writing style. (: You had me literally lol-ing multiple times.
This a wonderful story, and I love how you characterize Axel and Roxas.
And what a cliff-hanger to end a chapter on.
I hope you update soon. Keep up the good work!
| AkakoChiYuki chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
Maaaaaan. This is funny as hell. Looks like the kiss will complicate things. Please update the next chapter soon.
| Cirque du Lune chapter 3 . 11/12/2010
ROXAS YOU JERK.
And I hate you for that cliffhanger.
Just kidding, I love you. XD
So anyway, awesome chapter. Never fails to make me lol.
| RoxasIsReal13 chapter 3 . 11/11/2010
Good God, this is addictive~!
| BXTXS chapter 3 . 11/2/2010
hai! I LOVE THIS! i seriously can not wait for the next chapter! oh btw i already added this story to my account im just usin my psp X3
| iFilb3rt chapter 3 . 10/31/2010
Aha I was waiting for Axel to just pounce on Roxas xD Roxas is such a little jerk lol yay a kiss! Can't wait to see how Roxie responds D
| the14th chapter 3 . 10/28/2010
believe me or not I don't care, but this is best bloody fanfic I've read in my whole LIFE! and oh, I've read a lot.
you know, there are fanfics and there are FanFics (- *hint hint* capital F), and I guess you have figured out the meaning by now, but I'd be very happy to explain it anyway: its like fanfics are normal citizens and FanFics are gods. and this one here its just the god of gods.
you may think I'm exaggerating but I'm absolutely NOT!
this is like in these fantasy books when the hero is destined to save the world and this is just his merit to human kind.
well, this is yours.
you may not believe me, that you changed the whole world, but please believe me: you have changed mine.
because I now know what perfection is.
I'm crying you know. and not just because it's so unbelievably hilarious, but because this is so brilliant.
I mean... you've written this. you should know that this fanfic is divine. I mean your STYLE - it's amaaazing. After the first chapter I was speechless.
I'm very sorry but I have to stop this anthem right now because I can't wait two read these marvellous three chapters for the fourth time.
thank you so so so so so so so much for writing this.
and please forgive me for my bad english, since this is not my mother tongue.
I really tried to express my love and admiration and I hope you can acknoledge just a fraction of it.
I can't wait to read more - please please please update soon.
and I'm sorry if I'm being ridiculous, I'm just so blown away.
| XxXMayhemXxX chapter 3 . 10/27/2010
This is so well done! So hilarious, I'm having a good time reading it. Roxas is so super super angry! Like, whoa. But it's good, because now Axel is mellowing him out and Axel is trying so hard, aww.
Good stuff! Can't wait to read more!