|Reviews for 9 Years with the Marauders|
| Anusha Grewal chapter 45 . 5/1
I have been reading this series non-stop so far and I really like it. It is very well written.
I was reading the part about ancient magic like the Celtic, Native American and so on and I got to the part about Hindi magic. It does not really seem to fit in since Celtic, Native American and Aboriginals refer to peoples while Hindi refers to a language. There are no Hindi people in India. And there never has been as far as I know. Hindi is a language. Perhaps Hindus would be better here since Hindus are a people (people following Hinduism). And Hindi is also a relatively new language. Sanskrit is older and would probably be used for spells like Gaelic or Latin since we are talking about ancient magic like from the time of Stone Henge.
Just my thoughts. I hope you don't mind. And again, I really like the series. :)
| Strawberrybeat chapter 26 . 10/15/2016
I love ur fanfic soooo much. It's def one of the best mauderers ones out there
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/19/2015
I think that this:
"Just because Remus has some Maturity and Dignity doesn't mean he won't shank a bitch when he's mad."
Is the funniest thing I have EVER read in my entire life.
*laughs hestarically while rolling on the floor*
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/19/2015
By the way, the Barty Crouch your talking about is actually Barty Crouch Jr.
| WONDER PERSON chapter 65 . 3/26/2015
loved it more than life. xoxo
| too lazy to log chapter 20 . 6/7/2013
Okay I must admit I was (shamefully) driven to right my first review out of extreme dissapointment haha. I LOVE the story, I do. Gosh you're a brilliant writer, really one of my favorites thus far (I have read near and far, so that is saying quite a lot).
I must say I am horribly outraged that you have decided to place the wolf as the alpha of the pack. That means that if at any point he got out of hand, say a student was out after hours, the animagi would have no control over the wolf's behavior. HE will be the leader and THEY will have to follow suit or be slaughtered. Horrid, horrid stupid idea, I'm sorry. It would have made lightyears more sense for Sirius to quickly express dominance, so in any situation of crisis he, as the alpha, would be able to manage the situation and curb the wolf's reaction - at least to an extent.
I just hope this whole "Remus Moony alpha" thing doesn't become a strong recurring theme in your story. I was pleased with how realistic and tangible it was up until then.
Anywho, SO sorry I haven't reviewed until now. Wonderful story you've got going here. Really. I adore it to pieces. I just had to voice my outrage haha.
Love love love. You're a goddess dear. XXXX I have reading to do. I'll be sure to leave at least one more review! You deserve one for each chapter but ah.. Too late for that 20 chapters in xD
| crOwnlEssG chapter 65 . 4/7/2013
I... just... wanna... *slowclaps and stands up even though you can't really see it*
This is the first HP fic I've read, and I've gotta say that I'm incredibly glad I found this! Just... thank you for writing this amazing story! I wish I could've left you a review for every chapter (because you deserve a ton!) but I was too absorbed in the story until I finally got to the end. I've been reading this nonstop for days, and this has been the longest fic I've ever read within such a short period of time.
Bravo! You're a tremendous writer! And to have written 65 chapters (holy crap!) within a couple of months is unbelievable! Yeah, I know this review is three years late and I didn't experience waiting for the next update. Still, I can't get over how you did it.
And I especially love how you've written everybody! It's almost like you're J.K. herself! When I was searching for fics, I just wanted to read stories of Remus during the time of the Marauders. Not only have you made me love him more, you've also made me love practically everyone else! I enjoyed the witty banters, the fun times, the friendship and family bonding, the whole of the story...
And even though the ending is sad, I still wished I could hug the story because it's just brilliant. So, again, thank you so much for writing this!
PS: I can't seem to access your blog. I'm not sure if there's something wrong with my laptop or if anything happened to your blog.
| Potterhead chapter 31 . 9/26/2012
as much as I love your fanfic I never liked the remus/sirius ship, it never worked out for me and i just thought of them as pratically brothers for so long you kind of destroyed their happy bromance lol, but i really like your fanfic btw and i might be able to live through the ship
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 59 . 7/11/2012
Awwwh!Well,things look better for a while!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 55 . 7/11/2012
Loool!Having Remus is like having a wife?Awesome!And the way Remus feels about the whole Greyback issue,the detailing was amazing!Especially the moments when Remus was about to leave!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 47 . 6/18/2012
:D!the reunion was perfect!And the part with the window and the confession!Adooorable!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 31 . 6/16/2012
Awwwh!Wow,they kissed!And what a timing Sirius!honestly!But i loooved the emotions here,the way Sirius seems so adept at showing and completely lacking in the communication when required,all of it was cool!And James too,looks like his leader-ship qualities are coming out!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 16 . 6/15/2012
WHOOOA!well,what a chapter!The high emotions running,young boys are seriously energetic aren't they?XD!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 12 . 6/14/2012
WOOW!What an event!The whole scene in the forest with Bane and Aries!gosh,adding the little moment between Remus and Sirius like that too!Sweet!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 10 . 6/14/2012
Well no freakin way!Honestly,what was...nooooo!Remus my poor little wolfy boy!Nooooo!And whoooa,that scene with Aragog,awesomely scary!Lol,at least Lucius is useful for something!