|Reviews for 9 Years with the Marauders|
| too lazy to log chapter 20 . 6/7/2013
Okay I must admit I was (shamefully) driven to right my first review out of extreme dissapointment haha. I LOVE the story, I do. Gosh you're a brilliant writer, really one of my favorites thus far (I have read near and far, so that is saying quite a lot).
I must say I am horribly outraged that you have decided to place the wolf as the alpha of the pack. That means that if at any point he got out of hand, say a student was out after hours, the animagi would have no control over the wolf's behavior. HE will be the leader and THEY will have to follow suit or be slaughtered. Horrid, horrid stupid idea, I'm sorry. It would have made lightyears more sense for Sirius to quickly express dominance, so in any situation of crisis he, as the alpha, would be able to manage the situation and curb the wolf's reaction - at least to an extent.
I just hope this whole "Remus Moony alpha" thing doesn't become a strong recurring theme in your story. I was pleased with how realistic and tangible it was up until then.
Anywho, SO sorry I haven't reviewed until now. Wonderful story you've got going here. Really. I adore it to pieces. I just had to voice my outrage haha.
Love love love. You're a goddess dear. XXXX I have reading to do. I'll be sure to leave at least one more review! You deserve one for each chapter but ah.. Too late for that 20 chapters in xD
| crOwnlEssG chapter 65 . 4/7/2013
I... just... wanna... *slowclaps and stands up even though you can't really see it*
This is the first HP fic I've read, and I've gotta say that I'm incredibly glad I found this! Just... thank you for writing this amazing story! I wish I could've left you a review for every chapter (because you deserve a ton!) but I was too absorbed in the story until I finally got to the end. I've been reading this nonstop for days, and this has been the longest fic I've ever read within such a short period of time.
Bravo! You're a tremendous writer! And to have written 65 chapters (holy crap!) within a couple of months is unbelievable! Yeah, I know this review is three years late and I didn't experience waiting for the next update. Still, I can't get over how you did it.
And I especially love how you've written everybody! It's almost like you're J.K. herself! When I was searching for fics, I just wanted to read stories of Remus during the time of the Marauders. Not only have you made me love him more, you've also made me love practically everyone else! I enjoyed the witty banters, the fun times, the friendship and family bonding, the whole of the story...
And even though the ending is sad, I still wished I could hug the story because it's just brilliant. So, again, thank you so much for writing this!
PS: I can't seem to access your blog. I'm not sure if there's something wrong with my laptop or if anything happened to your blog.
| Potterhead chapter 31 . 9/26/2012
as much as I love your fanfic I never liked the remus/sirius ship, it never worked out for me and i just thought of them as pratically brothers for so long you kind of destroyed their happy bromance lol, but i really like your fanfic btw and i might be able to live through the ship
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 59 . 7/11/2012
Awwwh!Well,things look better for a while!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 55 . 7/11/2012
Loool!Having Remus is like having a wife?Awesome!And the way Remus feels about the whole Greyback issue,the detailing was amazing!Especially the moments when Remus was about to leave!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 47 . 6/18/2012
:D!the reunion was perfect!And the part with the window and the confession!Adooorable!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 31 . 6/16/2012
Awwwh!Wow,they kissed!And what a timing Sirius!honestly!But i loooved the emotions here,the way Sirius seems so adept at showing and completely lacking in the communication when required,all of it was cool!And James too,looks like his leader-ship qualities are coming out!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 16 . 6/15/2012
WHOOOA!well,what a chapter!The high emotions running,young boys are seriously energetic aren't they?XD!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 12 . 6/14/2012
WOOW!What an event!The whole scene in the forest with Bane and Aries!gosh,adding the little moment between Remus and Sirius like that too!Sweet!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 10 . 6/14/2012
Well no freakin way!Honestly,what was...nooooo!Remus my poor little wolfy boy!Nooooo!And whoooa,that scene with Aragog,awesomely scary!Lol,at least Lucius is useful for something!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 9 . 6/14/2012
Whoooa!The death was such a blow among all the lightness that every third years should be able to experience but instead there's a whole war thing and scary events occurring there!Great detailing of feelings and characters!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 6 . 6/13/2012
XD!Remus,temper temper!And Peter,lol,he really was a comic relief there!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 6/7/2012
Ah!No saying no to Sirius!It's cool how you showed Sirius's slightly Black side!
| TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
OOWEEEEE!Wow,what awesome characterisation!I love Remus's evading skills and the rest of the boys!Peter trying to copy Sirius's or James's expression,Sirius and James's sarcasm,and then when Remus starts bleeding, the way Sirius reacted to that!All of it is really well done!I loved the part in Transfiguration!McGonagall seems the type who would make everything look normal and not suspicious at all so asking Remus where he was seemed just right!
Lool!Professor Dustbins?McWhiskers?They really are second years aren't they?Niiice! And Remus's thoughts on the pure-blood act Sirius pulls and Lucius Malfoy about 'their table'!cool!
| Quill Scribblings chapter 21 . 3/8/2012
Oh my god. That was so intense! And, I think you wrote it brilliantly. How else could I be so caught up in the story and on the edge if my seat? Oh, Sirius, how could you let hormone-fuelled anger take over. Not that we all haven't all been there before _