Reviews for Marshmallow
AlecAndra chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Oh yeah - Marshmallow! So funny. Thank you.
Michelle Dyer chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
LMFAO! I will never look at marshmellows the same again! Ill be making smorse thinking about spanking! Lol thank you
OfAGroovyMind chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
hmmmm Edward's a uke?

Anywho this is CUTE!

Fr333bird chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Bwahaha! Marshmallow dick! I love it. That was fun!
upsidedownntwisted chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
PJ likes a lot.
ChloBoLow Hale chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Mmm marshmallows and dicks and spanking pretty asses. Yumm

emo-licious-gummies chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
WHAT THE HELL? You need to write more to this!
bmango chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
OK, last one. Which made me giggle a little. Well, perhaps several times and the hubs is giving me a funny look. :) The marshmallows are awesome and I'm always up for a little spank fic... :) -b
ColourmeCullen chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Omg. This was hilariously delicious and spanktastic.. lmao.
Nisa Cullen chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Predictable and reckless.

It makes sooo much sense that these things would draw Edward to Seth.

As for the naked eating of marshmallows and the erm spanking...erm i doubt i was suppose to enjoy reading this THAT much but I did.

JasperLuver48 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
I *really* enjoyed this futuretake, which makes me think I need to start Say Something Else soon :) Great job with the spanking!
izziey chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
damn. how did i miss this before?
OrphanAccount123 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Umm, hot. And beneath the hot I like that there was some depth too. Especially when Edward mentions it was two lifetimes ago, his lifetime before Alec, etc. And I like that even without direct mention, Alec's actions still color his thoughts in the way that he appreciates Seth's predictable and staid nature.

Still, it's mostly just hot.
1999prince chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I've got next. Loved it.
whitwit chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Love that last line! ;D
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