|Reviews for Keep your cool!|
| putyournamehere chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Bwahahah! I can't believe nobody's ever thought of something like this before...I can't believe I've never thought of it before!
Those guards are one of the few things that make me proud to be English, besides the crap cooking and the character :D
Ahh...I'd love to see the aftermath of this. And how Japan got hold of those tapes, but I'll elt my imagination wander I love this story!
| animeloveramy chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
oh, that was brilliant XD i loved it!
| Lina chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
Yes, I'm awesome! And you are too, because you wrote this and it is really awesome... wait, that didn't make any sense at all, did it?
Oh, well, whatever. I liked it. Japan is cool. And poor Iggy not beeing able to drink tea in the near future, is he? Oh well, I hope America is gonna keep him company or something.
| AriaEnternal chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Thanks this was a great story and it gave me some ideas on what to write for my own story for my creative writing class!
| ImaduckQuaQua chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
im awsome... poor athur! am i the only one that says arthur as arfor?
| IamthefemaleTonyStark chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
hi there i am wolfie! i just want to say you write brilliant!and i am not just saying that i love you stories so sweeet i love ukxusa please keep it up
| Akasuna no Rin chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
I was just waiting for America to pull out the big guns (ie: England's feelings for America that neither of them fully realize). That was hillarrious, and I was trying to keep it down so that my parents didn't wake up. I was like "Oh my gosh America! How can you bring up the Revolution like that?" then remembered it was America. Anyway, keep writing!
| alahmara chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
HAH!LOL! Japan? That's hilarious!
| frostneko chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
...! I think a friend of mine actually drew a picture of England dressed up as a royal gard.
| A Bleach-Drinking Hetalian chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
LETS GO TO THE.. HAMBURGER STREEEEET!
Ah, this was aweosme!
And so cute~
Japan, make Korea get the tapes for you!
Since Koreans make aweosme hackers~
What exactly is world ondo? I DON'T KNOW! I'm such a fail hetalia fan..
-sends you insparation-
I HOPE THAT HELPS!
| xxXSporkSistaXxx chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
HECK YEAH I'M AWESOME!
lol- this was so cute- and I love how you wrote America, cause in my headcanon, he's super annoying, but amazingly sweet.
| FluffyFly chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
That was so freaking bloody awesome! Iggy's reactions were so CUTE! And thank you Japan...I might just like you a little more for this! America annoying the crap out of the guards in front of Buckingham Palace is so like him! I want to see it. Make Himaruya do a strip about it and an episode! And of course HAPPY BIRTHDAY BERWALD! You should write more one-shots they're fun to read! I laughed out laud so many times! ...sorry if I'm not so comprehensive I'm terribly tired! 8'D
| Blackrigg chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
You are downright bloody AWESOME, do you know that? Oh, man, what a PERFECT way to start my summer vacation! I loved every bit of this - it made me laugh out loud several times!
You already know your characterisations are perfect, and your English gets even perfect-er by the day (I swear!)... No-one can write a goofy Alfred like you can! And wow, do I identify a LOT with Iggy in this fic…
And this part... This part is just... I can't even say how much I loved this particular line:
"It almost looked like the second-hand and the minute-hand had switched places just to tease him."
THAT. Mein Gott, child, were you born to do this or what? It's extremely hard to explain exactly what I saw in that sentence, but in context, after the brilliant pacing you used throughout the fic, it fit so well that I had to stop and gawk at it for a minute before continuing! Like finding a treasure! Not to mention the... interaction... between Al and Artie. The world needs more of that! xD
And not to mention the dialogues... You write them as well as an established author would after decades of practice - what can I tell you that you don’t already know about your skills? Your writing style is so unique and incredibly entertaining to read, you come up with plots that are simply stunning, and you make every universe your own, translating the atmosphere into sheer poetry on the page and cause even this exceedingly picky, literature-fanatic to drool all over the screen when you post something new... When I first started out reading your works I had a feeling you were good, but I couldn’t quite imagine that you’d grow (so quickly) to become a favourite writer of mine. There is a pure kind of happiness in your stories, dude! No matter what hardships you go through to come up with them, write them and polish them, your stories NEVER fail to make me smile when they’re published – because there’s soul and heart in them, and I can feel it.
I may be even beyond tired, and I may be completely off my head… but this is, at the same time, as honest as it gets. I’m not lying when I tell you I adore what you do – the excitement I bombard you with every time you mention writing should be enough proof of that! You are THE fanfic-writer to me! THE writer in general!
Don’t even stop, Spaniard. Don’t you dare! I’ll come after you and kick you if you do... This, like most everything of yours, is absolutely spectacular.