Reviews for His Own Path
Caramon Zero the Crimson Hero chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
It was pretty good, I'd say.

Yes, it was a bit short, but you need to keep working, you're doing great!

Most of your stories are good, so No Worries!

If you need any help with action scenes, I'll help you out. All you have to do is ask.

I had the same idea, and had started on a story since I began playing the game, so I have a few chapters up right now if you're interested in reading them. The story is the only rated M Dungeon Fighter on the list at the moment I post this review.

If you like it, drop me a line and I can help you out with the action scenes, although there are many who're better than me that would be wiling to help, I'd like to be considered.

Thank you for reading this, and Have An Awesome Life with No Worries!

-Caramon Zero, the Crimson Hero
William chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Quite a nice story. I liked it and gives a real feel of survival. Anyway, It's about time a Dnf/DFO fanfic finally got onto this site.
HylianHero5465 chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Yay! I get first review on first DFO fanfiction! Go me! I love this game by the way! XD

Anywho not as bad as you think. A little short and sketchy on some details but otherwise a pretty good one shot. Beeen thinking of writing a DFO fic myself though it would prooly be a crossover.