|Reviews for Why Did I Come?|
| Dark star chapter 1 . 3/22
Your writing is superb, and this captures so much!
Lovely, lovely, lovely!
| Toothless chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
Very good! We see so little poetry these days. Bravo!
| ForeverGoldenHeart chapter 1 . 8/11/2011
This poem is really good! Great job! :)
| A Forgotten One chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
hmmm...i like it. sinister, but hey, it's about war.
alwways keep faith :)
| NCR627 chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Goodness, this sent chills running up and down my spine. It was simply amazing! Unfortunately I have yet to read the book that inspired this, but I can assure you I will soon. It sounded as if it takes place in Vietnam? I can't be sure - please correct me if I'm wrong about that. Anyway, the way you wrote this in first person I think gave the piece more emphasis on the side of war most people choose to ignore - the raw truth - which truly made the piece. This was... an indescribably great read. I hope to see more pieces like this from an awesome writer such as yourself!