|Reviews for Georgia's Diary|
| Belladonna999 chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
This is such a sweet, heartfelt story. I love your writing style - it's so real, but so beautiful at the same time. I played Georgia in my school's production of Curtains last fall and ended up writing a lot about her. Your story fits her so so perfectly - wonderful job!
| Instead of Reality chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
"Of course his smile's gone now. He's gone. I must keep reminding myself that I was the one who ended it; I was the one who put it to a stop. I should be feeling relieved, I should be moving on, I shouldn't feel like every breath I take doesn't give me enough air, because he's not in the room- because he doesn't love me."
My heart broke for Georgia. Beautiful! Keep writing, please!
| DyanaRoseJill chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
I really like this story. I'm a fan of Curtains as well, and I think that you wrote Georgia very nicely. (I tend to write about Aaron, so it was fun to see "the other side" in a way that meshes very well with how I see things)
Among other things, I like the note about Barbra. It's little ties that aren't obvious unless one is really familiar with the show.
I think it would be very in character for Aaron to hide flowers for her, because he's sneaky like that. And it does seem in character for him. I might borrow that idea...
"It just grew tiring; always trying to boost his confidence, help him out, when he was shutting me out"
"Sometimes..." I am humming now. So another great tie in to the source material.
"Why am I always thinking about him?" - This one too.
I'm not sure if you meant "I am a modern woman" to be a Thataway reference, but it certainly made me think of that song.
"All I can think about is the expression on his face when he got the divorce papers. Those eyes, so lost, so hopeless, broke my heart into a thousand pieces." That line really expressed things nicely. I've always thought that Aaron didn't see it coming.
From a story telling point of view, I like the structure, and how you sandwiched it in between the ideas of Valentine's Day.
Aaron isn't the only one who misses the music.
I'm tempted to write a response from Aaron's side of things. Not that he read her diary, but he had to live through this valentines day as well.
So fantastic job, I loved the story and it's going into my favorites for sure.
| katzsoa chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
This was wonderful!
| Joss chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I really liked this. It was something interesting for me to read considering I was in the musical two years ago. ) Keep writing!
| GabyGal chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
This simply made my heart melt. It's sweet and sad, but definitely not soppy or badly-written - It's wonderful! It really sounds like it's in Georgia's words.
Also, I love Curtains and am thrilled to see a fan story for it! :)
| Icywingsoffire chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
Ahhhhhhh! You can't know how psyched I was to see this fic! I was on the main page, and I saw the plays/musicals link, and I thought, "hmm... could there be a Curtains one?" Imagine my delight when there was!
You see, I did Curtains recently! I played Johnny, and it has weasled its way into my number one favorite musical ever! I'm so happy that someone else out ther appreciates it!
You rock my thespian socks!